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i look in the mirror and the boy i saw yesterday ain't there
so i gotta look to the future soon cause the past ain't clear
its a mess today wishing all my troubles were swept away
so i gotta move on disrespected emperor with new shoes on
its the truth ya'll so i gotta bomb on 'em go saddam on em
but i'm feeling like its 4th down guess i gotta go long on em
looking beyond hardships is hard shit but i'm a marksman
carving my name in history all these dames i was quick to leave
the fame and misery those who claim i reigned in infamy
looking to put a blade in my discs & leave all pissed at me FUCK YALL
it ain't shit to me you shit on my name tryed to get at my dame
spitting the same behind my back you was giving my name
just pay me no mind at all cause i ain't got the time for ya'll
i don't know what to feel anymore nobodys real anymore


i been hated debated as the greatest maimed as entertainment
but i never say shit these fakers make me famous over lame shit
i have no claims in just save it cause i'm beyond hating
you pathetic bitches i'm a king of the title not worth claiming
so i dispurse pages of superb greatness you'll learn later
meditating to heavens gates wrecking slaveships lessons
impressive as satan lending a favor tired of pretending
and mentioning names kid cause nothings what it seems to be
no matter how vivid the scenery so its fuck dreams it seems
no trust leaves my seeds with these wicked & evil deeds
bitches scheme on me i'm not a nice person
i'll call you names i'll ignore your calls i'm not mr right searching
for a lying bitch i'd rather die in piss knowing my pride exists
cause their ain't no nice girls anymore just hoes whores and sluts
that all lie if they say they love you anymore than once
so despite that i still write tracks where i pour my love
dropping more than two cents with new hits, if you ain't ask for it
fast forward cause i can afford a buck to spew shit

its the truth ya'll so i gotta bomb on 'em go saddam on em
but i'm feeling like its 4th down guess i gotta go long on em

you pathetic bitches i'm a king of the title not worth claiming

for a lying bitch i'd rather die in piss knowing my pride exists

nice as usual..the multis and rhyme scheme was definitely dope..those are a few of some of the dope lines...idk if it was suppose to be...but it seemed as if u were letting out some frustration or anger..but definitely in an intelligent and well rhymed way..so keep it up..thanks for the feedback on my piece as well..