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8 Bars or less
no flips
no crew votes
no dick ridin
3-0 or 4-1=KO
first to 5= win
deadline 2 days

this time stick with 8 bars or less... follow ur own rules

checkin in..

u a bitch who writes tracks about getting beat by dere mom-holmes
matter of fact u should quit and go back 2 writing daniella love-poems
i did my research i came prepared-son
found out u the first ''black man'' to create a ginger haired son
this kid is a net g he dont even know who he is
a wannabe hustler who cant even provide for his kid

we know u aint gangsta stop frontin about gun play
cause u da same wanksta who claimed he attented court on a sunday
everything ive said is true i aint told a lie yet-brother
i heard ur track ''my life'' where u rapped bout getin raped by ur stepbrother
u wana deny i can send people da tracks
da kid aint a hater im just telling people the facts
i asked bout u ''net dating loser'' thats what people told-me
wanabe eminem claiming 'mom beat me'' and ''dad disowned me''

i have to say the dirt i dug left me bewildered
so called thug does this line look familiar

''who ever thought that id get raped i dont know but that was my fate'' (a line jj wrote in his song 'my life')

any time this week jj!!

hmm I'll try and break this down and elaborate as much as I can

AJ - your verse is very simple, the content is simple and the vocab is simple. You had alot of personals but alot were played out as well though you may not be aware of that. Some of the words you use to rhyme are very elementry and didnt really rhyme... though you did do good on researching lol and you had some good bars

JJ - I think I questioned a bar or two and had to re-read it to figure out where you were going with it, but your flow was definatley much better and your content and punches came alot harder. I think you stepped it up alot in this battle


My vote is for JJ/theoneyouhate

1-0 uppin

all jjs shit is fictional ''ass rape was da case then u bled for weeks' man u know that neva happened hit me with somethin thats true then u say ''you got no idea what guns are about'' maybe i dont but i aint the one talking gangsta online son get relevant.

AJ wrote:all jjs shit is fictional ''ass rape was da case then u bled for weeks' man u know that neva happened hit me with somethin thats true then u say ''you got no idea what guns are about'' maybe i dont but i aint the one talking gangsta online son get relevant.

stop ur bitchin theoneyouhate didn't take offence when u dissed him about not takin care of his kid... n who knows ur shit could be false so stop cryin n stfu

newayz voting on the battle

personals - AJ but they could be false who knows
punches - TOUH
multies - didn't see ne
wordplay - meh TOUH
structure - TOUH

he got this easily both of u work on multies AJ ur shit was too forced... stop it...

my vote = TOUH

n AJ if u come back n claim this as a hate vote... ur dumber than u look re-read ur battle again... n figure it out

jj how can u even accuse me of recycling my shit when i have been sent a battle of u battling Dustin where u rap 'u aint going no where while im going platinium like sisqos hair' look familiar biting cassidy huh jj?

u motherfuckers dont no jack..fact. AJ hit him personal and made him look like a little bitch. (theoneyouhate) didnt hit him hard one bit, he's a faggot ass pussy and yall of u's voting are low life shitty rap critics who havent got a clue.

Tough Battle to Vote On!!!!!

Lyrically JJ took this one easily, Punches and Personal it was really close. Now personals can be fictional as well as non-fictional. Cuz honestly you can never know if your gonna know your opponent. AJ's punches are supposedly true which make them hit harder, but the way there were worded were as simple as possible/could be. Therefor battles have a lot more to it then jus Personals bein true.

Personals - AJ
Punches - JJ
Flow/Structure - JJ
Multies - JJ
Nameplay - Neither
WordPlay - JJ

Vote: JJ

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