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Orange - SymBoliKuLL
Red - Ekoms

Ima Vindicate, this Sick Innate, thought process while I Rip Irate, my Whits Insane,
My Gifted Brain, Lifts yuh Frame, so were gonna Spit In Vein till you Sit -n- Shake,//
You'll Re-Witness Greats, in this Vicious Game, Slittin Fakes from Wrists to Face,
This is an Eclipsin Phrase reminissin of Clipse that Graze, Hips to Legs, never Miss wit Aim,//
We're Kings of Syllables, if you Think your Lyrical, Ill Dream a Visable drop to Sink your Spiritual,
We even Blink Invincible, to Crease yuh Visuals, Keep Subliminal shots to yuh Knees a Minimal,//
Deemed a Clinical, Beast & Cynical, in the Streets to Physical, see me easily Beat you Pitiful,
Tease & Ridicule, you into a whole so Deep its Miniscule, Seized in Critical, my Heats Political,//
Ima giant so Stand on Stilts, It aint a Man who Built, the Clan of TILTS, it's a Hand of Skills,
That Plans to Kill, every Band at Will, till yuh Glands left Spilt like a empty Glass of Milk,//
Wit Track Appeals, we leave Classics Drilled, Intact Untill yall are like “Damn that's ILLâ€

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Liked it...Was good how yall both would use 3 or 4 words with the same rhyme..Ekoms was a lil hard to follow cuz of his structure but i followed it well for the most part..Plenty of good lines so theres no need to only pick one to say it was my fav..Good Drop 4rm Both..

yea i really didn't like my verse at all... not just becuz of the choppy structure but becuz of the simplicity.. although i did do the 2nd half with a fever/headache, as the first i only had writers block...tried to manage for the most part.. n e ways thanks for the feedback..i think if we do a third it'll be the last.. for now atleast..

Multis were sick...very incredible...its amazing what you two can come up with. Im still jealous of you assheads! your vocab is impressive as fuck...the rhyme scheme is tight and you guys excell at doing this and im not okay with there only being one more so you should re-think that! Not sure why others arent leaving feed on this and for those of you who didnt read it you need to b/c its worth every second of the time it takes. Good job boys

Gracias Amigo! Pinche Bendajo...lol jk

Thanx for the feedback you 2, its really appreciated. this isnt jus somethin you could throw away this took time. Lotta multies bein torn apart up there.lol

Big Ups

UppIN 4 Feed

ouch, pinche cabron holmes, vatos locos forever ese

Yeah Multis Were Sick. Structure Was Ffs Lol But it Worked. Flowed Nice Aswell... Thats Really All i Can Say Lol. There Really Wasnt Much To This at All. Just Lines Like 'ill Do This 2 u So This Happens' With a Shitload Of Multis. Symbollikul u Stepped ur Flow And Multis Up a Lot Since ur Last Drop. Ekoms i Aint Seen Too Much From u But im Gnna Say i Liked ur Verse More Because it Had a Lot More To it Than Just Multis And imagery. Which is Basically All This Piece Was Lol. Ekoms Was Pretty Sick With The Punches He Did Have. Symbollikul Even Though What u intended it To Be.. u Did it Great. i Dont Like That Style at All Though Lol, But For What The Topic Was u Guys Pulled it Off Pretty Excellent Lol. id Have Liked To See More Punches, Mettas, Wordplay n Shit But it Was Good. Keep it Up

thanx for the feed domino, its hard to incorperate all those other aspects into a 10 bar verse when all your worried about is multies, i mean you can do, sure, but i was goin for a verse fulla multies thats it. but again thanx for feed

BRUTHA!!!!!

UppIN

Nice work guys sick multis as always
pure FIRE.
8/10

my verses r always full of multis, just like domino's is full of shit.. oops did i say that outloud *snickers* lol j/p dominose.. and yea i'll definitely keep it up -grabs a box of viagra-

this could use some more feed!!!!!

Symbolikull, most of your verse seemed force and a lot of the rhymes didn't even make sense. A barrage of multies don't hit so hard when they're just a bunch of syllables that sound the same but don't yield any logical conclusion.

SmokE's verse flowed a lot smoother I thought. "Take your threads and begin hanging yourself" was a great line. I liked that one. I have to admit though, the whole "slashing your necks" theme is getting tired. Rap about something you'd actually do or incorporate sick metaphors that make people say "oh, shit!" out loud when they hear them or read them.

Eminem once said: "I bought cages tape, opened it and dubbed over it." That's simple, very effective and hilarious. Whether or not he actually bought cages tape and recorded over it is not the point; the point is, it's very feasible that he did. When you start talking about killing people, "tracking your hopes" (wtf?) and splitting glands, I get turned off rather quickly. Because I know you're not actually doing that. It's one thing to say you're killing someone metaphorically - but all this slashing and killing and shooting and peeling wigs back and busting caps - stoops. Just my opinion.

well u dont know wat a person will actually do.. not that im saying i'll go and do something like that but its definitely soemthing that runs thru my mind and i won't hesitate to do so in the act of hatred, but yea i get wat ur saying...this was simply just rhyming for me.. most of my shit is just to flow rather then get a point across

EkomS wrote:this was simply just rhyming for me.. most of my shit is just to flow rather then get a point across

that was noticeable... but u know u're good with multies, so i'm skipping that part.. like the others have mentioned before u had a terrible structure ekoms, but the flow was still consistent and tight, def the best drop outta u too

symbolikull, i gotta agree with mr. numbers in a lot of the rhymes not makin sense.. u always drop some deep shit, maybe i don't understand everything u're sayin.. i don't know.. but anyway, the flow was pretty good and vocab was great.. keep it up!!