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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:30 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
Damn!!!
I would undoubtably have to say this is the bes drop ive ever seen/read from you, the imagry and metas were sick. flow wasnt too bad but theres always room for improvement.
tha idea of death is ta die young as late as possible
no such thing as livin a short life death's un-stoppable
cant always say ya know you'll be livin tomorrow
give me another lung my last breaths are borrowed
they said it was fate when i made a mistake
now bring me death because life isnt that great....
^^fav lines
big ups kid, nice to see you elevatin
Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 12:21 pm
by ~*Blitz*~
yeah, this was a kick ass piece from you - I think its my fav from you that I've read....is this the shit you were working on last night? You got creative with it and you brought that out nicely in this verse. I enjoyed reading it. WHEW for JJ!!
Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:18 pm
by SlickMex
Yea mayne it was nice..making me wanna step my game up..Good Drop..n rememba me n u can make a crew jus get at me..
Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:28 pm
by ~*Blitz*~
*feeds you*
Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:53 pm
by LadySam
well coming from ME and our dislikeness for eachother u should take it as a huge compliment haha
ok ill shut up and jus say it
like these ppl here, i think this is one of the best uve written, i think coz it was deep. i enjoyed reading it.
fav lines:
id tie tha noose but i dont think id hang right
lookin kinda like my bars my body hang tight
cant always say ya know you'll be livin tomorrow
give me another lung my last breaths are borrowed
they said it was fate when i made a mistake
now bring me death because life isnt that great
so there u go mate, i fed u =)
Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 12:47 am
by B-Bear
yeah, def your best written.. think this is the first piece i've seen form u that isn't about guns.. lol.. topic is kinda played put tho, it was def a nice piece (didn't care bout the flow or structure since u warned us.. haha).. but u had some ill imagery in this one..keep it up man, can def see some elevation here.. had some nice quoteables as well..
cant always say ya know you'll be livin tomorrow
give me another lung my last breaths are borrowed
suicide tha permanent solution for a temporary situation
ice to tha brains and blades to my throat patiently waitin
they said it was fate when i made a mistake
now bring me death because life isnt that great....
Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:45 am
by -TraMaTiK-
overall hot piece JJ no doubt...loved it all actually lol...stay doin u homie -1-
Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 3:49 pm
by drunken jesus
Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 1:12 am
by B-Bear
lmfao
Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 1:58 pm
by drunken jesus
just fucking with you kiddo, it showed alot more content than most of the other shit you dropped here overall it was solid but like you said the structure and rhyme scheme were choppy
and my pics aren't random, i use them when duty calls
Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:46 am
by Stina
holy fuck i loved this! specially the first line .. the first line is always a good key to hookin somone to your verse ..
"suicide tha permanent solution for a temporary situation"
sad, but true.
and also, I liked this one:
"for some reasin im infatuated with death
id slit my own throat just ta gain some respect "
great peice over all actually.
