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This is Something i Wrote in a Hurrrrrry. im Playing Around With Different Styles at The Mo... Buuut This One is Just a 'Summary' Of a Piece im Going To Be Doing Like.. Whenever Lol. it's Basically What The Name is. About How u Bully Ppl into Worshipping u Even When They Dont Think The Same in Their Head. Basically Just To Feel Better About Yourself. BASICALLY Bullying Lol. But it Means More lol. This One is Just a Quick One About What Goes On in a Bully's Head lol. ill Get More Clear On The Next One.

Ever Had The Feelin You've Become One-Of-ur-Problems ..||
Worthless, Begin To See-Yourself as Scum-at-The-Bottom ..||
Turn-Sour, Cuz u Got No Blunt-Power, Stuck-in-a-Rotten ..||
Pit Of Self Hate, Where All u Believe is Negative, Luck-And-No-God-But, ..||
u Find an Outlet, Between-Hate, And Duckin-The-Bombings ..||
u Think ur Wiping a Clean-Slate, But ur Just Fuckin-With-Progress ..||
u Cant Lick ur Wounds, Now it's About Making-Them-Pay ..||
Fear And Hate For Yourself Has Anger Taking-it's-Place ..||
Anger Turns into Feeling Owed, And u Believe-ur-The-Best ..||
And Asking For Worship, Just For Relieving-The-Stress ..||
Some Fall For it, Some Think ur Just Nothing-But-Fallen ..||
And ur Victims Give u 'False immortality', Struck-With-a-Rocket ..||
Like a Drug ur Never Needin-Help And Nothin-Can-Stop-Him ..||
ur at The Top Of The World, Most Know ur Nothing-But-Common ..||
Soon it Dawns, They Only Called u 'Great' So You-Could-Be-Happy ..||
Nothin But a Charity Case, And While ur Usually-Laughing ..||
u Fall Back into a Slump, u Realised All This Greatness-Was-False ..||
ur Nothing, u Could Only See ur Aura, it's Fake-And-it's-Wrong ..||
Right Back Where u Started, Now u Feel Stupid-u-Tried ..||
Fell From The Clouds And Awoken To a Spooky-Surprise ..||


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did someone take ya lunch money? lol
dope drop i see what ya mean about makin it more clear
alot of potential on the topic but im sure in what ive seen from you itll be crystal.. nice

Nah i Used To Be a Bully Moowahahaha, Then u Just Grow Up And Realise That ur 'Aura' Fades. Hance The Name Lol. Thanks For The Feed.

the ending was nice, very sketchy and jumped around a bit...but a nice piece. Never knew what went on in a mean persons head so ty for letting me know lol. you fucken assholes! Anyway nice drop domino, looking forward to one you put more effort into on this subject

Yea it was a good drop..but on some of the lines i got lost in the rhyme..must be the way i read it cuz lines didnt even rhyme to me.But it was still a good drop..Work need on it tho..

yea i agree i got lost in some lines, but i like the topic. doing greatttt mr domino, keep dropping wanker aka fuckwit aka loser
hahaha <3

pretty much agree with the rest who has left feedback, nice idea, but a lil bit choppy.. some words didn't rhyme and some were off point.. but i understand what u want with the piece.. like blitzy said, sit down and put some more effort in it and u'll have one hell of a piece man! keep it up!

Well i Mean i Liked it..............

Lol it's Just About Looking For Confidence in Other Ppl, By Kicking Their Ass And Making Them Respect u.

THATS how u gotta get sum shit done lol