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We just collabed on MSN quick and though we'd share it with you losers...lets get it poppin


TheOneYouHate -
i ask myself how could shawty lie ta me
used ta tell me she was tha one ta confide in me
now that i think 'bout it maybe it was good that we cut tha ropes
now im spittin razors i just wanna cut ha throat
left me alone with a kid when i was broke
wish i could feed tha bitch her own lies and watch her choke
burned everything like she was Angela Bassett
no such thing as dreams from tha matress
now i wanna hook her up like ha liver failed
think i give a fuck about sittin in jail?
it's tha truth ladies playas too lyin and cheatin
who ever thought false truths could be so deceivin?

Lawgix
i never thought i'd live to see another day
fade away faster than ur memory was put away

but the sun came out evaporation took place
of your devilish face u won't find another me i'm hard to replace

i remember i was in the state of no return
but i was yearning to learn to forget so ur photos i burned

n only left half i was the good guy i did my hardest to try
not to pry into ur life but for that i was set aside

so i cried but i'm tired of sheadin tears been almost a year
that i steered clear of your evil ways so now i'm through my dear

but i'll tell you somethin that you probably already know
at once i felt rain but now i'm feelin a steady snow

~*Blitze*~
All men are the same, yup every one of em lie, cheat and deceive
You were no different, you sliced my throat and now I cant breathe/
I relied on you and took pride in you... and this is my thanks?
What a hell of a way for you to take our relationship to the bank/
You're such a bastard, Props for attacking my heart,
Always thought of you as the spark that guided me through the dark/
But the truths out, You were just two faced and one sided
Now our world as one has just split and collided/
But I won't cry or choke, Cause I rely on hope
And as soon as you find this note, I'll help ya tie the rope/
It's been over so its worthless to cry, Its now pointless to try
Say your good-byes, Cause the love i felt for you was just buried alive/

^^ TUSSIN

wtf is tussin? you guys make me feel fucken old and retarded with all this lingo

and how about some detailed feedback you lazy ass

robitussin fuckin sick

never heard that... but thanx for the feed uppin for more!

YaLl MaD aT tHe PeNiS

TaKiNg Ur FrUsTrAtIoN oUt WiTh A pEn

WoMeN aInt ReAllY GoOd At MuCh

WeLl BeSideS lAuNdRy, YalL kNoW wHaT i MeaN

ThEy A BiT DuMb, YaLl DiD aLrIghT tHoUgH

NoW gEt BaCk To SuCkIng MeAt

this was pritty good guys..and blitz..

ThaWunYouHate..I Like The Emoition you put in this flow coulda been abit better but you were good on topic and stayed with it for the whole way through there is still some improvement in your game witch you could easily grab id give your verse a 7/10..Fav Bar

left me alone with a kid when i was broke
wish i could feed tha bitch her own lies and watch her choke

Lawgix..yours had the most orginailty witch i did like about this drop vocab stayed on point aswell flow was decent, it seemed a little rushed though..i thought that you should have taken a little bit more time to polish your bars off even nicer then they already are 7.5/10

i remember i was in the state of no return
but i was yearning to learn to forget so ur photos i burned

Blitz..this drop was okay no doubt thought you coulda hit abit harder and complexity was a small problem in this drop i did enjoy this though some things i read stunned me on how much you have improved your game so good work 7.3/10..//

ThaWunUhate Lawgix Blitz you all did a good job im glad to see this it was deff a good read from all of you

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and drop some feed on me and ekoms drop its called the sequel of smoke or something like that peace.

erratic d wrote:YaLl MaD aT tHe PeNiS

TaKiNg Ur FrUsTrAtIoN oUt WiTh A pEn

WoMeN aInt ReAllY GoOd At MuCh

WeLl BeSideS lAuNdRy, YalL kNoW wHaT i MeaN

ThEy A BiT DuMb, YaLl DiD aLrIghT tHoUgH

NoW gEt BaCk To SuCkIng MeAt

plz dnt type like a fuckbag, thanks
and this colllab was banging
im very proud of my sam =)

this was a nice collab, you all stayed on topic wit each other, i thought blitz did the best she had the most emotion, TOYH your verse was aight man, i liked it, even though the flow was choppy at time, lawgix, my homie, you had an alright verse, you gotta step your game up wit some more distinguished vocab man, im startin to feel like everythin you write im readin the same thing (no hate) jus bein reel wit yuh.

good shit...random ass people in the collab but...it works out....yall did a nice job of downin the other gender i suppose...lol altho on blitz's verse it almost seemed real...lol...good job to u all tho..keep it up...

Wasnt real but ill take that as a compliment, i just tryed putting emotion into and making my piece seem real



and fuck yes im good at downing the other gender, those jews