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ummm.. pardon me but given a chance ill slice n artery/
smashin a clay aiken like im droppin pottery/
wit shards i bring n mix a drink wit bacardi while im partying/
you ain hard ta me leave you scarred from the bars i swing/

like weezy adams apple meet banana clip/
takin a banana shit on ya weak ass samantha grip/
leave ya bandanna ripped claimin you can handle this/

testin me thats a bad mistake/
feather pillow barricades are no match for my hand grenade/
watch ya man get sprayed lights out like a lamp wit shade/

demonic ebonics like retarded leprechauns you cant get hooked on me phonics//
constantly blowin got ya consantly chokin like im constantly holdin o's a free chronic//

my criminl mind leave ya decriminalized ill press rewind n drop lines in a biblical time//
im a giant you just a feminine size david beat goliath?? my rhymes ammendin that line//

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i always forget this shit lol

too much decoration homie, its a verse not a christmas tree

^^ lol appreciate the feed

uppin

hi, this was ok, i liked the last bar until the last line lol, im not sure if this is the way to describe your multies, but they were forced? lol something was up there so yea
other than that fun to read

this was alright i guess

the rhyming was cool minus all the bullshit d-as-h-es the wordplay was weak though, it either didn't really make sense or was really simple, wasn't horrible for random shittalking but it wasn't real memorable either


you're better off putting more time into verses and dropping less frequently cause you'll get the same total amount of replys if you drop 2 verses a week or 15

uppin more feed