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feelin dark

Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 6:32 am
by RH1NO
mental distortion its unfortunate
invested a small fortune n this
bith shunned me

had an abortion didnt tell me
clouded judgement like the next course of
action .. the gun b

i didnt tell you i thought youd leave me
believe me bitch decieve me theyll be nothin
left but a closed casket ta grieve

now a life never got a chance didnt know i had plans
to raise fam into a made man.. ta raise hands ..
take stands n make jams

or a baby girl ta protect in this crazy world
ta give a gravy world no chance fa her ta shine
like a hazy pearl

she had the benefit of the doubt but like i entered into a cloud
had the wool pulled over my eyes that i could believe without doubt

give everyone advice but never take your own
shoulda listen ta different perspective n now i lost an air ta the throne
dont care anymore bitch answer the phone cuz charlie manson is home
cancelled ya dome nothin but ants on the bones couldnt stand it no mo

smart enought not ta get hit wit a charge split in a shit car
cant believe i riddled ya tits wit scars n now im spittin bars about it
as i hit this gar n im still at large

Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 7:11 am
by RH1NO
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always forget this dam

Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 9:02 am
by RH1NO
uppin feed

Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 3:47 am
by RH1NO
LEAVE SOME FUCKIN FEED!!!!!!!!1..lol

Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:02 am
by Viral
its got a pretty good subject....it seems like everyone is going thru some type of girl problems or break up...or bitter feeling towards one...lol its crazy...but this was a pretty decent piece..the structure of it was fucked tho..lol n it coulda had a better flow to it..but overall it got the story behind it out so its all good...keep droppin man.... *return the favooorrr*

Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:08 am
by RH1NO
appreciate it i think i left feed on all of yours already

uppin

Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 5:20 am
by RH1NO
appreciate the time fam

Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 2:07 am
by RH1NO
uppin from pg. 2