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DG:
your first bar didnt really move me in anyway good or bad.
your second bar was aight, had a good direction wit, could be re-written to hit harder.
your third bar was pretty dope, i thought.

tired of cats runnin they mouth you aint shit so stop frontin//
"DA GUYs punches stun ya jaw like its equipped wit a pause button"//

the endin of was killer to me, i liked it, big ups
the fourth bars endin, was pretty creative to me, i actually thought it was pretty dope as well.
your fifth bar was kinda forced and dragged out a lil bit, it has potential to be a good bar though.


TOYH:
Honestly dude i was really feelin your verse, especially seein how its a crew collab, you jus didnt push the SwatTeam issue enuff, you kinda talked more about yourself rather than the crew, ive seen a lot better from you, so jus keep droppin..

appreciate the feed were probably gonna add verses to this but again thanks for takin time to leave feedback

i read both of em and 2 me there equally good...not out of the ordinary cuz like he said above me..i've seen better...so stay at it..find that burst of energy inside ad WRITE GOOD DAMN IT! WOOOOOOOO HERE COMES THE PAIN BABYYYYYYYY!!!!!! -Terry-Tate- lmaoo

Da Guy im feeling urs good multi's,and theoneyouhate lol i like ur shit more i can relate to it alot


VV

i dont give a fuck what you think or what you thought
im gonna rob what ever cant be bought
im still a youngin on some old hits
grew up poor so i sold shit
im steady ridin fast backs ta get fast ass
learned ta stack papa in science and math class
used ta ride solo now i gotta crew but fuck a label

So I dont like Da Guy's structure...to many lines and dots and such. Anyway on with it! I liked the content of both verses, I think you both coulda repped your crew a lil more but it is a new thing and all. TOYH, I enjoyed yours more. You had some funny shit lol but both you guys did good - it woulda been cool to see the WHOLE crew drop something you lazy fucks! Maybe next time

I wasn't feeling daguys verse at all.

I thought theoneyouhates verse was decent.

Nothing to impressive from either of you.

7/10

da guy - like i told you before, all the dashes isn't necessary especially when you're dashing apart single words, the epitomy was forced, flipper line was forced, pause line was aight, stay on ya grind is one too many syllables, lungs line was forced, last line was pretty forced too

overall it seems like you're trying to hard with wordplay and its not connecting, some of your multis don't really connect either, this was one of your weakest verses

theoneyouhate - started off cool kinda seeming like a 50 cent verse, nothing real special but it was solid, once you started tryna flip some punchlines you fell off, fever shit is played, beaver line was alright, the cake & pro-active lines don't make sense really

overall it was kinda mediocre i've seen you both come better, it wasn't real bad but it wasn't anything quotable either