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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 1:09 pm
by RH1NO
little choppy not bad though
Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 4:10 pm
by MesaR
Its pretty whack thawunuhates gets hardly no feedback.
THis Was Aight, not bad, but not great In the middle,
Had decent multis, flow was decent too, topic wise it sounds like the must shit ive read from u so it wasnt 2 creative PcE.
Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 12:07 am
by ~*Blitz*~
You tend to write on the same thing alot, I think you need a new topic ;p
This piece was alright, Ive seen more complex stuff from you before. It still wasnt bad though just kinda simple, it made me think you were just writing to get some shit off your mind and didnt much care about what it came out to be in the end...but all in all it was kinda here and there in some parts but other then that stuck with it...vocab was alright but like i said ive seen you do better