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Its Been Awhile since IL could Mention Style,
No Activity, No One to Rap wit or Send a File,
Full E-Hookers, Cock Strokers and Pedophiles,
Dead ass site fulla dick ridin so Plex Never Smiles,
Joinin the Tounries is like Diggin your Own Grave,
No Shows and DQ's leave open battles like Sammys Both Legs,(jk)
JK is bitin so much, Da Guys stressing him like Old Age,
“Fuck you Allâ€

this was ok it got better towards then end so i liked the end bits better than the begining.

"Joinin the Tounries is like Diggin your Own Grave,
No Shows and DQ's leave open battles like Sammys Both Legs,(jk)"

im not quoting this to hate, i dont care if it was about me or the other sam, but why would you use it if it doesnt rhyme?

it does rhyme if you say legs the way i say it.... like lages

besides the bar sam said above^^ i like dis one 2

Im Chokin Faggets, that cant hold anything sweet like Broken Cabnets,
Yall flip more dirty laundry than hotels witta Broke In Mattress,

hot shit^ not the hottest of ur piece but it stuck out 2 me...overall this was pretty soild..nice multis and punches n shit..feelin it...keep at it man..nice work..-PEaCe-

~Symbolikull~ wrote:it does rhyme if you say legs the way i say it.... like lages

and how do you say grave? graeves?
im only kidding dude lol

Haha Solid Drop, if it Helps, One Of The Big Guns Aka Me is Gnna Start Writin Again lol.
Good Use Of Vocab And ur Multis Were Consistent as Usual. a Couple Of Bars Had iffy Flow But Overall is Was a Tight Flowin Piece. Punches Were Aright Aswell, i Seen u Do Better But Nyeh Lol. Keep Droppin, Lets Bring This Shit Back To Life.

i feel you man, and that to yall for the feed back its appreciated