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One Round 6-8 bars
3 votes=K.O Or First To 5 votes=*Winner*

I'll drop first....

aight drop it

You fuckin with the wrong emcee, who nicer since me?..//
My lines paint pictures sharper than Da Vinci's..//

You not a rapper just rhyming talker, marathon walker..//
Runnin with a sprinter, not conditioned, got nothing to offer..//

The Real champ is me, whether its people's or Lyrically..//
So Next Time, Like "Hairlines", I suggest you "Recede"..//

Whether written forcefully or relaxed, ya shitty raps..//
Are just a fraction of my skill, like they was income tax..//

I got that feel like novacaine's in ya brain flow..//
Insane-though, I'll do you dirtier than cocaine-dough..//

If your verse is half as good as what I'm Bout to say..//
Then your Brain got twice as lucky to get those words arranged..//

Skeleton showin, Gutta exposed, you never rose past me..//
I Blast heat and break this rapper like rhinoplastys..//

Beast, I can take ya out ya misery and put ya in a social study book like u was history//
Rip through ya best verse with no sympathy, ya greatest hits soundin like mixtape shit to me//

I leave bitches with they pussy wet, Gutta get alot of dome, look//
The only girl that eva said ya name iz one of da million bitches in my fone book//

I spit one line and watch u crumble like da towers, on the streets I be smokin 4 hours//
you tha bitch that said he had enuff of jail, bein that first one dat drop da soap in the showers//

Listen when I rhyme I'm like the difference between the murder rate and the crime//
Beast come with lots of hate in his rhymes, SO I'mma crack his vertabrate from his spine//

Listen I'm trouble, I hustle, then relax and sit back to watch dem pies bubble//
I keep a nine for my enemies, look G, you couldnt even pretend ta be a beast in my Jungle//

Yo I stay so hot on da block, but dats prolly cuz i roll wit heaters//
Motherfuck Da Vinci, my rhymes paint pictures like Mona Lisa's//

My rhymes so insane, that when i spit em they eat thru ya brain//
I suggest you recede in dis game, and change ya name, this Beast needs ta be tamed//

Yo the shit that i spit on tracks, help me pay my income tax, so watch wat ya sayin out ya mouth//
After a long bid, I'll be chillen in ya moms crib, already layed out da down payment on da house//

Punches-Beast
Flow=BEAST
Personals=GUTTA

^^^^^ u even read my verse???

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Punches-Gutta
Personals-Gutta
Flow-Beast

Vote-Gutta

Gutta- You kept flippin Beast`s lines and words. He talks about recede and income tax, then u talk about the same. Im new to this site but is that not against the rules. It means whoever goes second is gettin an unfair advantage. You did that when u battled me too. Still think you did enough to take it tho

First off, I would just like to note that the Mona Lisa was painted by Da Vinci. So that line seemed completely senseless to me.

This was a close one.

Beast's flow was choppy and his hits weren't very hard; at least, not as hard as Gutta's. The rhyme scheme side of this battle definitely goes to Gutta. His composition was (mostly) relaxed and multi-syllable rhymes flowed very smoothly. I like the way Gutta took some of Beast's material and turned it against him; but I suppose that's the shitty part about going first.


Gutta, when you battle, you should refrain from talking about things like hustling and watching your pies bubble - it has nothing to do with the battle. It makes you seem like you can't stay on topic or you're just desperate for filler. Lastly, lines like this: "I leave bitches with they pussy wet, Gutta get alot of dome, look//
The only girl that eva said ya name iz one of da million bitches in my fone book//" are just plain wack. You wrote ", look" after dome, just so you could force the "fone[sic] book" rhyme - and it was wack. Why are girls in YOUR phone book calling out HIS name...? You just dissed yourself. Just my personal opinion.

Vote: Gutta.

^^^^ ya i undastand wat u guys r sayin some times i just write shit to fill up da lines but i still make it rhyme. I did not kno u couldnt flip but i do now and wont do it again. That line with the dome, look. why you thought it was whack? i was sayin i fuck bitches dawg, i get alot of head (dome) now look boi u ugly and the only girl u eva talked 2 is just one of the bitches in my fone book. i was tryin ta say hes not a pimp to simplify it.

Gutta wrote:^^^^ ya i undastand wat u guys r sayin some times i just write shit to fill up da lines but i still make it rhyme. I did not kno u couldnt flip but i do now and wont do it again. That line with the dome, look. why you thought it was whack? i was sayin i fuck bitches dawg, i get alot of head (dome) now look boi u ugly and the only girl u eva talked 2 is just one of the bitches in my fone book. i was tryin ta say hes not a pimp to simplify it.

Yeah, but when your rhymes need to be explained, they're not good. And I understood the "dome" part, but you forced the rhyme of that bar by adding the word "look", just to top it off with some wackness in the next line.

ight, ight than for tha feed tho mang

punches:beast
personals:gutta
flow:beast
creativity: neither
multies: meh..beast

both of u guys concepts were played as fuck.
like...

gutta:
I spit one line and watch u crumble like da towers, on the streets I be smokin 4 hours//
you tha bitch that said he had enuff of jail, bein that first one dat drop da soap in the showers//<<twin towers VERY played out as well as the soap in showers and ur opponent being gay

beast:
I got that feel like novacaine's in ya brain flow..//
Insane-though, I'll do you dirtier than cocaine-dough..// <<drug concept ..played

try to find more things to compare to when usin punches; drugs, 'homos', and guns aren't the only things

very close but..
vote: BEAST
2-2 uppin

yo ill admit i didnt hit hard with tha flow, but i came strong with the punches and i think i had a lot of multies??? but yo i didnt come hard in this battle so ill be lucky to win.

punches - beast
flow - beast
personals - i'm leanin more toward gutta
creativity - i saw alot in beast's verse gutta ur shit just drug on man... keep it short n sweet
multies - i will agree with harlequin, tho i didn't see too many i'll go with beast

beast - your verse was fire!! honestly that shit killed gutta imo

my fav lines were

The Real champ is me, whether its people's or Lyrically..//
So Next Time, Like "Hairlines", I suggest you "Recede"..//

Whether written forcefully or relaxed, ya shitty raps..//
Are just a fraction of my skill, like they was income tax..//
^^ i thought that went really good man nice job

gutta - your verse seemed forced... like u were tryin so hard to accomplish dissin him and u had some nice punches but i think beast got the better of you

the verse i did like -

Listen when I rhyme I'm like the difference between the murder rate and the crime//
Beast come with lots of hate in his rhymes, SO I'mma crack his vertabrate from his spine// << that was good

BUT gun talk don't win battles... ESPECIALLY on IL... alot of new-comers do that and its whack... drop the gun talk inna battle... cause gun talk can be used as personals if u use them often which i saw u did... so thats my advice

but my vote goes to beast

3-2 beast uppin lets keep this goin

ya this battle dont mean nuthin 2 me i wrote in a sec so ya thanx for da feed i guess i still thought he didnt come harda than me but whateva u guys decide