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I'm fuckin' cold, mastered a broken mold
never to do what one is told
I'm a correction in all the minds that fold
twist up then crumple and watch em miss
like ya hit everything but water when you piss
Its a sudden moment of bliss, sickness
A slip in the briss and You're left Dickless
a spilled disc, a skipped disk, and a whitness
then two, then one, then none
come back at me, man this is fun
I switch it up any way any day, wanna play?
I make you hide n' police seek, you went astray
now I spin it then light it up and spit it
its sick shit when I make you puke from each end
rotten to the core, with a sweetened pit
that Bitter Sweet Chocolate, Peanut Butter blend
stretch it out like taffy, but man I ain't laughin'
got weak ass Emcees gaggin', what'll happin'
you don't even know, let me show you ho
got that Quality Control, and you a foe
a lil doe, untouched, unshaved, got himself a lil fro
kinda mean, and obscene, but you can dream
get that lil light in your eye, a cum dribbled gleam
I don't care about money, I care about tearing seams
watching everything flitter away, and destroy teams
I do this for the reality, keep me as me by any means.

;sjahbf;sanfvbs;gvbslkgansjkvzdv Translation: typeo is back!...lol hmmm..havent seen a verse from u in awhile...dis ones not bad...but im not sure wat ur capable of ne more..so ill give it a 7/10 for shits n giggles...stay active tho..peeeace

I'm fuckin' cold, mastered a broken mold


Overall this wasn't the best looking piece,

but that first bar i quoted was Ill.....


a lil doe, untouched, unshaved, got himself a lil fro
kinda mean, and obscene, but you can dream

And that was some good depicting, and break down


Overall this piece, had its highlights and its down falls, but its a good piece, and a good start to get the rust-off 7.5/10

I'm not really sure what I'm capable of anymore either...

I'm gonna try to keep active though...get some battles goin', get in some tournys. And write up some shit, can only hope for some fun.