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Just Something I Wrote.
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 6:41 am
by BigP
ill hang ya upside down, just like a bat hanging upside down in a tree//
in my hood, im the local rapper, and im the realest local emcee//
i stay high, flyin just like a bee, dont you agree? dont test me//
im the highest mother fucker, i aint like no one else your just like the rest B//
im a 16 year old white lyricsist, that knows math and is even good in geometry//
stop doing what your doing, you aint gonna be the next me, you aint gonna be no artistry//
im the biggest, im the bestest, im the meanist, im the willest to dedicate my life to rap//
your the smallest, worst, happiest, unwilling persom to dedicate your life to that//
step ya game up, ill take ya fame yup, you aint nothing but a fat chump//
im still high and still coughing from that fat blunt, yup//
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 10:46 am
by Lawgix
atleast u didn't record it...
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 10:55 am
by BigP
Lawgix wrote:atleast u didn't record it...
why?
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 12:57 pm
by Menace
yo. that is possibly the worst stanza i have ever seen in my life.
you have just made everyone who read this stupider.
please stop while your life depends on it, pick a different hobby...
.... i recommend the South Beach Diet.
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 1:41 pm
by BigP
Menace wrote:yo. that is possibly the worst stanza i have ever seen in my life.
you have just made everyone who read this stupider.
please stop while your life depends on it, pick a different hobby...
.... i recommend the South Beach Diet.
shiit nigga it aint dat bad..
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 2:06 pm
by RH1NO
YO keep it simple you tried way too hard
spit about shit you know about n just write short lines at a time thatt
mean something n rhyme 1 word at a time n after you're good at that
rhyme 2 words n so on
this isnt even like a beginner verse you can really leave feed on
its terrible.....seriously
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 2:14 pm
by BigP
how is it that bad?
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 2:23 pm
by RH1NO
ill hang ya upside down, just like a bat hanging upside down in a tree//<-- said hang twice n was all filler words n basic
in my hood, im the local rapper, and im the realest local emcee//<-- said local twice n it was all filler n basic
i stay high, flyin just like a bee, dont you agree? dont test me// <-- sorry but its gay
im the highest mother fucker, i aint like no one else your just like the rest B// <---all filler , basic, forced
im a 16 year old white lyricsist, that knows math and is even good in geometry//<--all filler n basic
stop doing what your doing, you aint gonna be the next me, you aint gonna be no artistry//<-- basic filler makes no sense
im the biggest, im the bestest, im the meanist, im the willest to dedicate my life to rap//<-- dawg, bestest? basic filler
your the smallest, worst, happiest, unwilling persom to dedicate your life to that//< all filler n basic
step ya game up, ill take ya fame yup, you aint nothing but a fat chump//<--started like it was goin somewhere n ended it gay
im still high and still coughing from that fat blunt, yup//<-- short weak basic ending
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 2:34 pm
by BigP
whats a filler? anyway you can make it so its better? please.
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 12:31 am
by B-Bear
it's just weird havina white dude calli another man nigga, either u a racist or mentally retarded.. i'll put my money on both..
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 1:06 am
by BigP
naw man i aint no racist man, it just u gotta giv me sum credit on dat, i aint as bad as my old shit...
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 3:28 am
by B-Bear
BigP wrote:i aint as bad as my old shit...
lmfao!
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:02 am
by BigP
B-Bear wrote:BigP wrote:i aint as bad as my old shit...
lmfao!
Ok mr. bear, let me see what you can do.
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 8:03 am
by *.HarleQuin.*
link
Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 8:16 am
by BigP
*.HarleQuin.* wrote:link
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