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Posted: **Thu Jun 21, 2007 9:16 pm**

it-s-me-today-its-the-day-i-ve-been-rap ... t5554.html

Just Mucking Around

My Shits " Fire " so When You Read My Raps Im "burning-Ya-Eyes"...
You Couldnt " FLIP " My Shit Working At Macs Flippin Burgers-n--Fries..

Your Spits Are Lose, And You Know That My Shit-Is-Tight..
If Your Gonna Rap, Dont Talk About Crap. Just Spit-It-Right..

Im Shitting all Over This You , Maybe You Should Quit N Stop-It..
How Can You Have Money In Tha Bank? with nothing in Ur Wallet..

When Yall Spit It Seems You Dont Even Deserve A Rank..
You Couldnt " Cheque In " Waiting In The Line At A Bank..

I spit Nouns And Excellent-Verbs Witch Form N Create Elaganet-Terms..
Your Shit Isnt Relavant-Nerd. I Spit Pure Skill, And Inteligent-Words..

Just Mucking Around Upping Feed!..

Posted: **Thu Jun 28, 2007 3:56 pm**

not bad man i think i'd give it like a 6/10

Posted: **Thu Jun 28, 2007 4:13 pm**

Nice drop..had some good and funny stuff on it

Posted: **Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:50 am**

u started off good lil man.. prolly the best line.. then u had some straight punches, not eye-catching.. but funny..

keep it up.. lookin forward to seein more from u.. be patient man, that's vital to ya elevation...

Posted: **Tue Jul 03, 2007 4:05 am**

It was all good but i dont think burnign and burgers rhyme lol.
Keep it up was fun 2 read =D

Posted: **Wed Jul 04, 2007 8:29 am**

My Shits " Fire " so When You Read My Raps Im "burning-Ya-Eyes"...
You Couldnt " FLIP " My Shit Working At Macs Flippin Burgers-n--Fries..

i liked that bar the best

Posted: **Sat Jul 07, 2007 7:53 am**

6/10

i thought it was alright not straight fire but alright

Posted: **Sat Jul 07, 2007 2:41 pm**

lol yeah nothing special. i was just muckin around keepin what ever came to my head, thanks.

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