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iight.....

ayo how you on your grind keepin ya fans waitin...
tyrin to get amped when you chant what on them damn pages...
wit cha hands wavin, only out to demand wages...
i'll leave ya plans fadin, shit i'll even translate it...
just say, everything on your plate this mans ate it...
i got lines of force, to battle lines across tha grand stages...
you could tell yourself you on my level but not even...
you better eat,sleep,belive rap till you stop breathin...


juss sumthin quik..

drop a link!

leave some feed on someone elses drop

n then copy the link where you left feedback n paste it in wit your verse

to get feedback on your verse

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for off the top it cant be bad..better then big p when he takes TIME 2 write lol..anyways..it was decent..wanna see more from u tho..stay @ it..PeaCe

-Tramatik