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i just wanna spit sumtin rel quick coz im bored as fuck so 2 let u no it wont be rel great.

pick up mics,beat up dykes//
stick up nights,street fuck like//

im a kid tryin to get repspect, but i gotta give it to recieve//
im not gonna look at ne1s flow and have my eyes be decieved//

i dont know what im doing when i spit my shit//
if i got up on stage a couple hundred grand i would git//

please dont try to say that im whack i dont like being dissed//
but i gotta do what i hafta so i jump on beefs instead of gettin pissed//

my life aint like no god or nething but i no my life is blissed//
i remeber that night when death cam face to face and then we kissed//

i got away with my life and im thankful for that//
so thats why i must always rap//

when my life smacks me right in the face//
i look up to god and say my grace//

im thankful for the life that god had given me//
he gave me a white life aint nothin like a livin g//

but i got 2 personallities one lives black tha otha white//
i live in the streets in one life and the otha i always fight//

i dont know what im doin tryint to keep my head up//
when i got playas tryin to keep me down but i dont giva fuck//

let me end this one last bar wit the truth//
i put my heart and soul when i hop in the booth//

yeah that was striaght off the top of my dome its not rel great i no but yeah leave sum feed back please and tell me wat i should work on

"remember that night when death cam face to face and then we kissed"
Homo shit^..lmao..
It wasnt that good..well..i didnt like it..at all..keep writing tho..

do u know what that even means?

yeah means this freestyle sucked...

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is dis wat u mean?

^^ yeah its good now

iggghht so i gotta do that everytime i post sumtin neww?

only in here (the scriptures)

this way it insures everyone is getting/giving feedback

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Lawgix wrote:yeah means this freestyle sucked...

^^now u kno you wrong...LMAO

Im just saying that because overall all this "keystyle" was wack.

ahah w.e its kool wit me well instead of just tellin me i suck adn im whack tell me wat i should work on

The420Kid wrote:ahah w.e its kool wit me well instead of just tellin me i suck adn im whack tell me wat i should work on

Go to the school of elevation at the bottom of the index and read some of the stuff and ask DJ why you lost battles etc.

but i havnt lost ne battles yet