Hip Hop Forum

(Viral)

not even main lyrics but dey still blaze spirits//
leavin faint lyricsts all deaf n fazed spiritually//
am i da best or jst raised wit an infection dat breeds//
put to da test n crazed now i inject ya meet a virus dat feeds//
left here to spit deez acid flames burnin and eatin ya flesh//
next gear hit wit spastic fame now im releasin a mesh//
better invest in a vest before i plow shots thru ya chest//
set a fest to express da hate deez words intrest and impress//
explicit? yes but da crowd dont kno dis//
i flow wit a precision dat goes un-noticed//
illest shit ever written u wish mah lines were bitten//
verbally sickenin killin peters pipers while physically spittin//


(Complexity)
who else could take text, and smash//
only time you'll break plex is glass//
viral might be baked on grass//
but give him a light, and he faked ya ass//
its a mistake to clash,you'll get staked and trashed//
we've raked the cash, all over the net like we makin flash//
hope you feel safe in ash,I was placed in rap, laced on crack//
always braced for wack, i have MCs erasing-fast//
this is based-on-fact, most kids can't even base-on-bats//
feel like michael johnson the way I'm chased-on-tracks//

i know i suck worst then I use to, but i'm working on it

yeah i dont really like dat verse i wrote..but oh well...wat verse of mine do i like?....lol

umm yea a little disappointing idk what happen to plex and virals rhyme scheme just threw me off and whatever happen to your vocab but yea wasnt that bad id give it a 7/10