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Ghost- 1st
TGYH- 2nd


Im controlled by the masses, and cops patroll to harras us,
Its unknown so they ask us, why we get stoned and pack guns, G

i'll Riddle A Rhyme A Piece At A Time While i Let A Track Run
We're Belittled in Time So i Strike Tha Page With A Line Like i'm Supportin Crack Funds T

But really Im broke i Stack Ones, my lyrics are poor, I Lack Puns,
Im steady livin in the Wack Slums, so i fall in pits cuz my Backs Numb, G

This is Tha Reason i Pack One Reach For tha Gat When i Grab Guns
i Keep Speakin a Rap But Nothin Comes Out Like i Never Had Lungs, T

A Soldier or Vet? fuck you we'll battle yall Over Respect,
Rips from Shoulders to Necks, its not my fault you Chose to Attempt, G

i'll Set A Blaze To Tha Paper While My Pen's Burnin Tha Page
i Got Tha Mentality Of A Beast And A Face Of A Man While i'm Turnin This Rage, T

As Im Learnin to Reign, Im Yurnin to Flame, up while Im Workin this Game,
Ima Vermin UnTamed, Lurkin to Rape, you monkeys cuz i suffer from the Curse of the Ape, G

When i Go Ta Hollywood i'm Bringin Tha Slums Along Son
i'm An Animal So i Load Tha 34 And Let 'Em Catch A Long One, T

I Spit the Truth, while I Rip the Booth, I might jus Grip yuh Tooth, and Strip the Root,
Cuz I aint the one thats Quick to Shoot, but Im Sick so I Stick my Shoe in yuh ass til you Lick my Boot, G

i'll Break Ya Neck While i Spit A Line Turn it Side Ways So it Clips Ya Spine
Tha Steel Shinin While Tha Wheels Grindin Kiss Tha Piece With Lips To Nines, T

Ima Criminal, steelin yuh shine like its Elliptical, Mystical force from these Lyricals,
My Spiritual will bruise yuh Physical, wit intellectual scriptures and no Pistol Pulled, G

When i Spit A Rhyme Shit Gets "Waist Deep" Like i'm Walkin Through Asses
i Just Turn Around And Flip 'Em Tha Finger While i'm Talkin To Masses, T



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Solid Piece. The Multis Were Dope All The Way Through in This And The Punches Were Nice. Liked The Style in Which u Guys Wrote it And My Favourite Lines Are.

A Soldier or Vet? fuck you we'll battle yall Over Respect,
Rips from Shoulders to Necks, its not my fault you Chose to Attempt, G

i'll Set A Blaze To Tha Paper While My Pen's Burnin Tha Page
i Got Tha Mentality Of A Beast And A Face Of A Man While i'm Turnin This Rage, T

As Im Learnin to Reign, Im Yurnin to Flame, up while Im Workin this Game,
Ima Vermin UnTamed, Lurkin to Rape, you monkeys cuz i suffer from the Curse of the Ape, G

When i Go Ta Hollywood i'm Bringin Tha Slums Along Son
i'm An Animal So i Load Tha 34 And Let 'Em Catch A Long One, T

u Guys Flowed Nice With Each Other, Keep it Up.

fuck it this shit was ill and im never gettin this far up there.

that shit was pretty tight you guys flowed together really good and i like the topic u did

BigP wrote:fuck it this shit was ill and im never gettin this far up there.

Stop Feeling Sorry For Yourself Man.

That was a nice Drop..
Both flowed well after each other..

pretty good, TOYH impressed me, i dont really read most of his writtens, but he did good, nice flow, nice rhymin, and ghost did good with the rhyming as usual, the chemistry seemed decent, you both did good, keep it up.

Nice.

My favorite lines...

When i Spit A Rhyme Shit Gets "Waist Deep" Like i'm Walkin Through Asses

Im steady livin in the Wack Slums, so i fall in pits cuz my Backs Numb, G

i Keep Speakin a Rap But Nothin Comes Out Like i Never Had Lungs, T

Ima Vermin UnTamed, Lurkin to Rape, you monkeys cuz i suffer from the Curse of the Ape, G

When i Go Ta Hollywood i'm Bringin Tha Slums Along Son

this was a really nice drop u 2 got some good chemistry and the one you hate really impressed me it seems likes hes coming along very well with his writtens

good job guys!

You guys need to really read some more writtens from theoneyouhate..He write some pretty good things..but of course this site loves to look at their buddys writtens only and expect them to leave feed when they get none like him..

thanx for the feed guys, the funny thing is this was like a keyestyled cypher... jus when wit it..lol

big ups

UppIN

~Symbolikull~ wrote:thanx for the feed guys, the funny thing is this was like a keyestyled cypher... jus when wit it..lol

big ups

UppIN

That's pretty good for a keystyle/cypher work..

i think ive read and left feed an jus about all of his writtens unless i aint around or have the internet.. but yeah thatguy does write some ill shit even though he likes guns ALOT...

thanx for the feed man

UppIN

U fuckers made me laugh...

Def some good chemistry in this piece, but u just can't take all the G's and T's at the end of every fuckin baar!! it's fuckin annoying!!

anyway, it had flow, creativity, dope similies, mulites.. yeah, and it was tiiight!! good job u two! keep it up