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Khan-Verse Feat. Tha Phantom-Don't Try

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:44 pm
by KhanVerse903
Tha Phantom-First
Khan-Verse-Second

First things First i'll come threw with my pen-n-a-pad./
Here to do my worst rippin' people wit' shit they-aint-even-had./
My shit ain't even bad, It's actually on-point./
My mind is out there from this one-joint./
It's called high-on-life, So get ya mind-on-right./
Before you Challenge the best Being a Lyrical Person I-Am-Tight./
I'm the Best of the YO, And that's Youngstown ohio, I'm ready to go they not fuckin' wit' my flow./
You can't battle K.V and you can't battle S.P./
I'll leave you simply just left deep./
Under our feet, Fucking with us Lyrically you'll be Left to stink./
I am "Tha-Phantom" AkA "Tha-Truth", Man-ya-done when we spit not just in the-booth./
I'm spitting the truth "SP" Is the intials of a lyrical-killa./
Here Go's KhanVerse this shit couldn't-Get-Realer.



Crack open your skull and Destroy your Thoughts Before They Develop//
It's a hell of a Vendetta, Cause I'll Rock-You-Fellas//
Stop-The-Letters, I receive From Individuals with Hate-and-Ridicule//
But I'll Debate-Your-Syllables, Cause it's Pitiful with your Written Rituals//
K.V. You know The Initials, K Stand For Kritical for my Belligerent-Missiles//
V stands For Vicious, Cause I'm a Corrupted Gen. That'll Devour-your-Wishes//
And Yes Scott-Can-Rap, Cause Bots-Get-Caped, And Pops-on-Tracks, And He'll Knock-Yo-Stacks, And Crush Your Stats//
I Rap But You Wrap-As-Well, I Rap Verse With The Wrath-Of-Hell, You Wrap Burgers and ask “medium-Well??â€

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:27 pm
by thaphantom
I think my verse kinda sucks but his is nice...Yall should post some replies on this bitch

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:29 pm
by KhanVerse903
naw yours was straight don't worry about it. shit i look over mine and i want to change something but oh well.

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:48 am
by complexity
The reason it has absolutely no feedback is because you didn't leave feedback on any other pieces.

I'll leave feedback on this, after you do.

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:50 am
by RH1NO

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 9:26 am
by thaphantom
Yeah but shit i been doin' otha shit.... i just started gettin back on this bitch

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 10:13 am
by thaphantom

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 11:41 am
by Dead Silence
shit sounds alright a lil work on it and itd be better good work on it tho

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 11:16 am
by complexity
Micz you're an idiot for saying phantom hasn't improved. Maybe on the multi's he hasn't, but his flow
has improved ages. I think he outshined Kool-Aid a little bit on this drop.

Overall: not to bad, i would give it a 6/10 ;)

Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 2:25 am
by KhanVerse903
hey if he out did me that's good, I have no problem with that, good shit phantom