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against all odds me versus the world

when the fog seems to be cursed as it swirls

dont ever threaten me you will get met with heat

you can see the strength through my lyrics like visual energy

im a physical entity

respect my presence or get dealt with extensively

ill make an exception if you unintentionally mention me

but directly your best bet is not even ta mess with me

theres no recipe to be a text emcee

especially when you dont feel it intestinally

my fortitude stay crossin lines n boundaries like a border feud

wipe up the floor with you

have you diving against ya will without a snorkel dude

good shit man

T.K.6 wrote:good shit man

Leave Better Feedback, Because im Pretty Certain u Were Gnna Wait For Others To Give Feedback And Then Post Again More Detailed, Stop Doing This For ur Postcount.

umm im not i just put simple feed coz i dont feel like typin

Agree, U've improved greatly with your punches and multies, and that shows... but didn't really catch your structure on this one.. made the flow choppy at occasions.. keep workin on that!

thanks for the feed homies

n tk6

Gee thanks

T.K.6 wrote:Gee thanks

well we know u don't have ne friends on here... but if u have a myspace atleast feel lucky u have Tom on ur list

nice drop homie flow kinda started off a lil off or so but u picked up the lyric base after a couple of bars... so good job man u have improved alot...

keep it up son!!!

peace

not bad not bad..

It wasnt your best..

put it that way..