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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 4:42 pm
by drunken jesus
first dude was good, the 2 dudes after him had alotta trouble staying on beat
1st dude - no complaints, 2nd & 3rd need alotta delivery and flow work, get some rhythm, swagger, presence, & confidence and ya'll should be straight
Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 1:07 pm
by 16 Micz
i agree wit DJ, overall a nice track u got hear, if the last two work on their delivery and flow, the first one was nice tho, beat was good lyrics were good, quality was eh, charisma was ok, but anywho keep it up
Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:35 am
by Mephisto
That beats pretty slick, sounds nice and the 1st guy had a nice flow on for it, other 2 guy were alright. Solid track overall. Just keep at it.
Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2007 8:25 pm
by LadySam
yea the first guy was good, i like the beat also, i dunno if its from another song or whatever, the second guy was ok i think he was iffy at the beginning but alright towards the end, i liked yours tho, not bad mate, good work.
Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 9:31 am
by HKX
track is aight but da last 2 need 2 up it a notch shits decent tho lol