Hip Hop Forum

'One' is a Metallica Song About a WW1 Soldier Who Was Critically injured By a Landmine, i Think They Got The idea After Watching Johnny Got His Gun Or Something Like That. Anyway, He Loses His Limbs And Senses. So Basically He's Stuck in Eternal Hell, He's Not Able To Kill Himself Or Ask To Be Taken Off Life Support. This is My Rap Version Of it With The Original Metallica Choruses in italics For Those Faggots Who're Gnna Try And Call Me a Plagiarist.


All This Suffering i Can't Release,
When i Scream it Stays inside Of Me.
Can't Grasp Any Feelings, im Just Waiting-For-Death,
i Sit Alone in This Mental Casket, Retracing-My-Steps.

Replaying Moments in My Head, Ones i Remember,
And Come To an Abrupt Ending, Stuck in Darkness Forever.
i Can't Enjoy The Sun in July, Or The Snow in December,
Nothing is Real Now, id Welcome Hell And it's Embers.

Waking Up And Sleeping? There's No Difference-To-Me,
Donno if i Have Grankids, But im Wishing-To-See.
Darkness imprisoning-Me, Can't Escape This-And-Be-Free,
Listen-To-Me, im Not Bullshitting-u-See.

im Nothing But a Prop Now, But im Feeling-The-Pain,
Of My Past, And i Can't Scream it's All Concealed-in-My-Brain.
There's Nowhere To Run, im Desperate For a Second-Chance,
Everything's Gone, My Sight, My Ears, My Life, Legs-And-Hands.

Hold my breath as I wish for death
Oh please god, wake me

im Stuck in a Place Far Worse Than Death,
Life Support Keeps Me Here, i Hope it Disconnects.
i Can't Tell Them To Turn it Off, i Barely Catch-a-Breath,
i Can't Signal That im Hurting, Do They Know This? That's-a-Bet.

So Can't They Make The Decision, Where's My Family-Gone?
Are They Hoping i Wake Up? God That Has-To-Be-All.
im Lost at Sea Without Any Phone, Noone Knows im All Alone,
Everything's Out Of My Control, i Just Hope Somebody Knows.

it's Like im Back in The Womb, it's Like i Don't Even-Exist,
Asking Questions Noone Can Answer, Like it's Clearing-The-Mist.
After Years i Can't Face This Taboo, i Know im Never-Leaving,
Hell is Here, it's Alive And it's Well, i Know That Hell-is-Breathing.

Hell On Earth? i Could Be On Fucking Pluto For All-i-Know,
See, All i Know is Nothing, im Just Alone With My Hollow-Soul.
Waiting For Death, Waiting For The Pain To End, it's The Only Escape From This Hell,
And All i Can Do is Wait, i Can't Ask To Be Killed, And i Can't End it Myself.

Hold my breath as I wish for death
Oh please god, wake me

Now the world is gone I'm just one
Oh god, help me
Hold my breath as I wish for death
Oh please god, help me


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post52119.html#52119

Pretty emotional similar to your outburst over the Kurse battle.

You make a great emo son.

I liked most of it.

Now. Leave me real feedback on my drop.

Yeah, I liked it..

A bit repetitive is the only critisicm i can aim at this.. loved the multies, just a few that didn't quite rhyme to me (gotta love the british accent right?).. content was real good and i thought the whole idea was creative.. haven't heard the song, so i can't really say anything bout the comparison, if it's too similar to the original.. but i liked it man.. don't think i've seen u drop such an emotional drop since your wrote about that guy who got cancer.. and that was brilliant.. the flow was tight.. it usually is when u drop anyway.. lol.. but keep droppin.. don't let this be your last written, unless u're goin audio.. then i'll accept it.. lol

B-Bear wrote:Yeah, I liked it..

A bit repetitive is the only critisicm i can aim at this.. loved the multies, just a few that didn't quite rhyme to me (gotta love the british accent right?).. content was real good and i thought the whole idea was creative.. haven't heard the song, so i can't really say anything bout the comparison, if it's too similar to the original.. but i liked it man.. don't think i've seen u drop such an emotional drop since your wrote about that guy who got cancer.. and that was brilliant.. the flow was tight.. it usually is when u drop anyway.. lol.. but keep droppin.. don't let this be your last written, unless u're goin audio.. then i'll accept it.. lol

it Was a Girl Who Had Cancer Btw Lol.

Nah it's Not Really Similar To The Real Song, Google The Lyrics. But You'll See That ive Went Off Some Of The Things in The Real Song, And Said Them Differently. i Did Think This Was Kinda Repetitive Aswell i Couldn't Really Think Of Much To Say About it, Tricky Subject. Thanks For The Feed.

Yeah, I know it's a tricky subject, but u handled it very well..