When All Falls Apart Snippet
Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 9:48 pm
Here's a snippet of my first ever recorded track.. i'll be posting the full version as soon as it's finished
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When All Falls Apart Snippet
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 10:34 pm
The snippet wasn`t really long enough to get proper feel for the track. But it seemed pretty good. You rode the beat well and i would imagine the lyrics will be on point going by your writtens. Its good to hear someone else doing audio. Look forward to hearin more audio from you
Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 10:35 pm
I was very interested to hear this.
You sound a little to robotic.
The lyrics are nice as hell. It's crazy the amount you have elevated lyrically.
You seem to have a nice flow, but something seems to be wrong with the voice.
You sound a little to robotic.
The lyrics are nice as hell. It's crazy the amount you have elevated lyrically.
You seem to have a nice flow, but something seems to be wrong with the voice.
Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 11:47 pm
I know it's reeeally short.. but wasn't able to cutter only took about 20 sec.. but i'll be finishin the track pretty soon, prolly on thursday, then i'll post it..
My voice sounding robotic.. hmmm... interesting point.. never really considered that.. u thinkin like i gotta put more attitude into my delivery or what?
My voice sounding robotic.. hmmm... interesting point.. never really considered that.. u thinkin like i gotta put more attitude into my delivery or what?
Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:43 pm
you foreign or something?
Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 3:12 pm
Sounds pretty good, you just kinda have trouble saying a few words just gotta perfect your flow. You kinda have that laid back lazy dope sound like mf doom pretty cool. Keep at it.
Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:14 pm
I'm a god damn viking dude! from the lands in the north.. i'm from norway.. loldrunken jesus wrote:you foreign or something?
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 4:31 am
damn all this time i thought you was a corny white dude turns out you're a corny viking
main problem is your enunciation you kinda slur words together delivery and shit was straight just work on your enunciation so you saying all the words clearly
main problem is your enunciation you kinda slur words together delivery and shit was straight just work on your enunciation so you saying all the words clearly
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 7:33 am
Gotta love the picture!drunken jesus wrote:damn all this time i thought you was a corny white dude turns out you're a corny viking
main problem is your enunciation you kinda slur words together delivery and shit was straight just work on your enunciation so you saying all the words clearly
Yeah, I feel like i'm mumbling in some parts.. together with the enunciation.. but i gotta say, no braggin or nothin.. but for being a norwegian dude, i feel like i got a pretty straight pronuncaition.. it's better then A LOT of others..