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Unforgotten

Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 3:43 am
by Ambiguous Realm
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/addre ... t6316.html

"remember the days when u were basic as fuck, and people put u down and said "face it u suck", dickriders all boo'd u away but the lyrics wouldn't let go and pulled u to stay, and that first battle u lost that put u to shame, plus the insults and the hate that cut thru ya name..well i remember all that when i get depressed, but most importantly i remember when i was the best...."


as a matter-of-fact, take notes n start learnin~the~tricks,
of how i shattered-the-tracks when my lyrics turned~into~bricks,
so i had them gathered-in-packs then scattered-in-maps,
till it started burnin~my~lips--apart..i spat flames to climb this ladder-of-stats,
splattered-the-rap--spits~to~chart n grip~ya~heart,
leavin u ripped in bits~of~shards, so creative its as if i flipped a script~of~art....


just somethin to write out of boredom, too lazy to post a link but u know i leave enough feedback so don't tell me wat i need to do

second piece is probably a bit difficult to understand, but its basically flaunting my skills creaitively as to show how i became "the best" IMO, first part was just a simple piece remembering the old shyt i've gone thru in the past


that's all i really gotta say.. im out now, tired as fuck

Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 4:36 am
by complexity
I liked the story better in the first part, but appreciate the lyrical in the second part.