Hip Hop Forum

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From weight pushers to great ambushes
straight to crack cookers, its slavery all over again
black hookers, so Im holding the pen
like Im holding it down, even though i know its the end
Im a poet to them, immense thoughts
transcend, with this omen to send
we all throw in our sense, even though we knowing its dense
hip hop is condensed, but we quick to go to its defense
my mentality has changed but the realities the same
we have ourselves in actuality to blame
morality is gone, our culture has lost its soul n heart
like Martin Luther King returned, and stole the start
hip-hop will stop...we know its ours
but we need to rebuild, and wont show the scars
the deep cut wounds, that will eat us soon
we all are going to be buried in the deepest tombs

we all throw in our sense, even though we knowing its dense
hip hop is condensed, but we quick to go to its defense

so tru^ but hey man this was nice..multis as usual and deep thought..thats why i like ur drops

wish it was longer but hey if u felt it was done..good work..liked it plex nice shit...uNo

Love the topic, and I liked the verse too, although the flow was a lil choppy at some parts.. your opener stood out as the best line, catchin my attention.. and liked the ending as well.. hope u'll continue with the same topic, did u write this to a beat?