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16 lines.

3 days to drop.

so im battlin twice???

well the other battle i dont see happening, so for the moment u can just remove me, i'll get back at it some other time

That was another obvious mistake. Thanks for the help everyone.

YOU HAVE A DAY AND A HALF TO DROP, OR YOU BOTH GET A LOSS!!

aight

ehh went a little over this is : MENTAL FELON

BUT IM SURE HE WONT MIND MATCHIN BARS

intro:
just finished construction buck
i need no introduction
leave these suckas abducted get a ransom up
ill be brief when i leave the instructions
fuck that bein afraid shit face it shameless
no way ta be famous duct taped in a basement

huh ..

i teach classes ill be gettin rude in this section
this is my mission and i choose to accept it
you might feel a bruise in a second
the first rule of this business is
all the dirt that we do can and will be used against us
your an act, i smack faggotts that cant relax the mac spoiled me
place ya wack ass on the "RR" tracks fo the fact ya lack loyalty
cats think they eatin good til the table turns
i ll make ya learn, that ya bark aint as vicious as my rabies burn
grindin reverse makin 180 fakeys turn, stuck ta styles played out as a 80's perm(anent)
i dont care what you say, ive scalped so many heads im usin nair on TOUPÉS
lyrics stayin (stain) on so many lips you would swear its kool aid
even taken out lames wit sraight razors that they name would embarass lupe
tried ta aim at me, but i already beat you at your own game this week
quick ta get sized up wise up u aint hard dawg you fakin beast
kindness or weakness neithers mistaken me, dont wanna scar you ya makin me
you think that apes/real/fools, (april fools)nobody swingin from ya monkey bars
im smokin skunk in gars, only time fiasco bangins from the trunk of cars
tired of nitwit hipocrites, oh ya sick wit clips? how many you hit wit it?
you should slit ya wrist your, ideas are as empty as a ethiopan dinner dish
nah i aint finished fam, try ta brute us but your legacy is over quit the spam
tried ta pull a "L/jack/son", even came equipped with "sam"
tryin ta win with scams, but ya cant fight popeye holdin spinach cans
"pre written rell", "convenient store warrior", you a "pick kwik soldier"
kick flips over, ill knock ya out ya shoes ta watch ya kicks flip over


watch me..

halfway crook no ones gettin behind ya pens(penn) bars
shit been on lock im a mental felon
what ya got aint gellin you got no passion ,fruit.. wanna rent my melon
you change flava like a skittle do who writes ya scriptures dude
im in a riddle mood, why is rell like ashes on d-12's mantle? ya right dog ya little proof
you cant man up ta knuck wit this fuckin bitch suck a dick
nobody feels you.. matta fact dude gotta tuck his dick back ta touch a chick

OMG NO NOT AGAIN!!!!!

This is a battle man!! Not a written contest!!

its a battle verse he did "subliminal criminal" hence mental felon

intro:
i Would Juss Duck Before ya Dead ..
Callin` Me Gay, But U Lookin` For Dildos On Tha Web ..
U Can Look at Mah Kicks, & Tell i`m Worth ..
Millions, & Plus i "Flow Satan Spits" That`ll Bring ya "Hell On Earth" ..
He Mad `cus i Got House Bills as Sneaks, U Juss Wish U Had a Car Prick ..
He Got Kurse On His Dick, So He actin` Hard Quick ..
But Mah Punches`ll Embrass Him, Make Him "Not Show His Face" Like His "Avator Pic" ..//..


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He`s a Lame, Might as Well Start askin` Puff ta Spit, Rell That Dude That`ll Handcuff ya Chick ..//..
Tell Her Hands Up & Strip, even Though This Nigga always "Sittin On His ass" But "Stand Up For Dick?" ..//..
He Had a Rough Childhood, `cus Dad Was "Pumpin` His Rear" Like He Was "Gassin` Up a Whip" ..//..
Nigga Think He Sky High `cus He Cheated, But Like "Unpulled Up Zippers" i`ma Bring Tha "Fly Down" ..//..
Say He Started Rappin` to Get Chicks, We Call Him "Velcro Shoes", `cus He`ll Never Get "Tied Down" ..//..
Rhino Love Mah Spits, `cus Bitch These Rhymes is Raw, Mah Breezies "Fine" They "Define The Law" ..//..
Wanna Play? Give ya Weak Lines a Pause, He Call Himself Tha Mental Felon, `cus He "Behind Mah Bars" ..//..
Say That He Bustin` Flows, But He Juss Pipin` Buttons, Split ya Wig, `cus These Rhymes is Buzzin ..//..
Breakin` Up Slugs, These Nines is Dumpin`, U Like "Kurse For This Months awards" alot Of "Hype For Nothin`" ..//.. *
10 Percent Of His Bars is Up Dom`s ass, Notice That He`s a Stan, Wit Eminem in 90 Percent Of His Lines ..//..
i`m Heat Wit These Rhymes, He Say He "Hustle", Only Time He "Dish Out Bricks" is Bein` "Shaq 90 Percent Of Tha Time" ..//..
it`s a Fact, That i`m Tha Great, To Get Girls U`ll Literally Have to Blind a Date, ya Rhymes is Fake ..//..
U Such a Eminem Dickrider, U Wanna Be "Shady", Bullets`ll Make U "Slim Fast" Without Tha "Diet Shakes" ..//..
i`m Juss Livin` Mah Life, Gettin` Dizzy From This Green i`m Countin`, i`m Fire, U Juss Steam amountin` ..//..
Flow Fresh, i`m Clean Wit Fountains, Coulda Came Better, But U "Fell Off Quicker" Than "Suicidal Teens On Mountains" ..//..
He Love Tha ass Kiss, But i`m Queer?, actin` Like He Had Hits? & i`m Here, Make Him Do a Backflip, Tha Lines Steer ..//..
i`m Mad Sick, Rhymes Fear, i Studied ya Style, U Read Everybody`s Battles & Verses Then "Flip They Concepts" Like "Gymnastic ideas" ..//..
People Call Him Rhino in Person, `cus He Known For Bein` On all Fours, He Friendly Lol He Juss act Mean ..//..
He "Soft Porn" He "act Clean", Punches`ll Leave His Name engraved "On a Rock" Like a "Dead Crackfiend" ..//..

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Dunn, U Predictable, Before U even Posted, i Know ya Rhymes ..
Mah Posts`ll Make "Rh1no Wet His Threads" Like He "Pissed On Tha Echo Clothing Line" ..//..
"Crushed U" Like U "Roll Wit Wine", He`ll Blow, Juss Tell Him to Get Down ..//..
He`s Most improved?, But 10 Years From Now, He`ll Be Tha Same Piece Of Shit He is Now ..//..
U a Follower Homie, On Me `cus Kurse is, U Should Juss Let Me Breathe Quick ..//..
& i Can`t Lose This Battle `cus Mah "16 is Meaner" Than Yours, Call Tha Flow "MTV Kids" ..//..

lets get some votes goin

these tourneys are takin forever

Ok. Sorry about that rhino. I only skimmed through the verse.

Rhino

Personals: 12
Punches: 8
Flow: 8
Multis/Rhyme Scheme: 3
Originality: 3
Wordplay/Sims/Metas: 6

Total=40




Rell

Personals: 10
Punches: 8
Flow: 7
Multis/Rhyme Scheme: 4
Originality: 4
Wordplay/Sims/Metas: 9

Total=42


Winner = Rell

the voting is appreciated

uppin