Hip Hop Forum

Ridin' real ridin so slow in that H-O----U-S-T-O-N town spin ground shakes body aches thoughts breaks tip lakes crip takes an advantage to dat A town lay down stay down da bay down gray ground stray sound let dat gun's bullets leak away then sneak away like dat slim klown to dat grim town dat M town to dat Montgomery my life heres a summary....can't think of one or a paraphrase the game reflects in dat marra phase I glare a phase in my life stare a blaze in your eyes in the sky's light reveals lies No matter how cocky I get I'm not picking up the mic and spit shit on you bear huggin' pull tuggin' slip like an instant insert plug-in pimp thuggin' deal sluggin' still drug n' real muggin' trill fuggin'(fuckin') feel stuggin' (stuck in) ho buggin' toss chuggin' boss truggin'(truckin') feelin' all luckin' ho all ball suckin' ho pimpin' flo' trippin' fo' tippin' slow sippin' wood grain grippin' drop it stain drippin' you fame slippin' I'm slang crippin' barber shop bang clippin' jewelry rang chippin' got that dye thang dippin' finger flippin' country singer trippin' givin' that lip n' all of it ball shove it if I call love it screamin' shout G like get out B try but you can't do nothin' bout me
Brandon~Slim Thug
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Just tell me how good it was and I'm thinkin' bout going underground.....oh and killah....I want to see you post a rap....a rap not a freestyle..... Anybody that wanna try and beat the rap I just made, go ahead

it was pretty decent...u repeated alotta words...and it was a basic rhyme scheme..wit like 6 or more words dat rhymed...some of it didnt make sense towards da end seemed like u were jst shovin shit in dere...lol but ive done dat before...jst stay up...n stay active..ill give u a 6/10 on dis one tho


EDIT: Also this was in the Wrong Forum so i moved it to Written Rhymes

I'm not new and I don't think so

not bad...could be better..7/10