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so we paying-dividents, for immigrants, to stay-in-prisment||
even though there innocent, it needs to stop this instant||
the whole country is in-sin, we haven't even made an imprint||
just rapping but, what happened, to the bibles documentation||
does it get dropped, if theres a tip-off, your not from this nation||
this shits-soft, a rip-off, for two hundred years we been patient||
martin luther king is in his grave waiting, the deliberation||
i aint faking, i'm down right hating, America the racist haven||
full of facist-mavens, don't want to hear this, change the station||
got a problem with it, i wont hesitate to rearrange ya face in||
i'm white and know its amazing, for someone so young||
bright as an asian, to be raising, problems so dumb||
don't act stunned, like you didn't know, its not a hidden-flow||
just forbidden-though, Usa is like the desert its hard to live-in-yo||
we shouldn't have any problem, with any kid-in-snow||
right now, i won't even spell freedom with an 0||
just an E, if your slow, yah free-dem, yah right||

I have this written a little different also, so if i get bad feedback on it, ill show you that one.

i liked it....the begining half kinda reminded me of immortal technique....lol jst a watered down version...but yea...i wanna see dat other thing u were talkin about....8/10 its been awhile since uve really dropped ne quality...dont stop

.lol jst a watered down version

shakes my head, still looking for some feedback on this. And some other pieces. lol, i really didn't think i've been droping much lately, but have a quite a few pieces up, of course none with feedback

Its amazing how irrelevant this topic was when i dropped this piece. And how relevant it is now.