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Freestyle (Bored)

Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 9:32 pm
by EZCome
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post55974.html#55974

everyday i stay Mad High
submerged in flows like i'm Babtised
Craft Ryhmes 'Dope, Hotter' then Crack Pipes
That Right E-Z got Bitches Chastised
Fuck Sluts.. One Punch give punk Victims Black Eyes
Spit Lines.. Dictum 'Drivin to Shine' like Cab Lights
'Raps Colder' then 'Bagged Ice',
its fact this Cats Nice, with a Path thats Divine as Rabi's
been Advised to Incline by Design like NaSa Flights
Melting minds cuz there dim-with it like candle lights
Kick Sickness when i grab a mic ... with a wax murdering Appatite
daggers and jagged knives slicing up these faggit's like
there good for nothing, plus I'm never trusting bad advice
theres re-percussions like drum echo's if we ever had to fight
I'll Crash the Site! Get Smakced On Sight
With Metal magnums packin side effects like Test subject medicine's Advertised..!



Bored.........................................

Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 9:51 pm
by MesaR
EZcome, you have to go to a drop a in scriptures and leave feed... post the link you left feed in under your verse and then you will get feed.. so everyone gets a fair go.

Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 10:00 pm
by EZCome
Yeah my bad im familiar with tha rule.

Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 10:05 pm
by MesaR
thought this was pretty good for a freestyle some nice punches, but the one i didnt like was..

Raps Colder' then 'Bagged Ice', <<< pretty simple and played out but besides that i thought it was a soild drop good work, keep dropping and make your self a home for good.. peace

Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 10:10 pm
by EZCome
Reps For Tha Feedd.

Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 1:00 am
by B-Bear
SequencE wrote:thought this was pretty good for a freestyle some nice punches, but the one i didnt like was..

Raps Colder' then 'Bagged Ice', <<< pretty simple and played out but besides that i thought it was a soild drop peace
Co-signing that, and it seemed a lil choppy sometimes.. other then that, it's all good

Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:08 am
by -TraMaTiK-
yea as they said above some of ur punches are played out but it happens now n then..anyways..this was a cool lil drop,liked this bar below

its fact this Cats Nice, with a Path thats Divine as Rabi's
been Advised to Incline by Design like NaSa Flights

the flow i didnt catch on like instantly but i caught it pretty quick..prolly cuz i just woke up..but yea nice lil piece,wanna see u do diff subjects tho so we can tell if ur versatile or not..ya kno? stay droppin

Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 1:34 pm
by EZCome
Word.

Much Respect Brah.