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Hes Feeling Like Hov Wit The Take Over, But you Outta Luck Like u Picked a Fake Clover
Spitt Ether Unload a Clip Till None in Tha Pistol Left, Make Ya Jaw Decay Like Crystal Meth/
Grilling Me Ima Punch Ya Grill Till Aint No Crystals Left.
Getting Attacked By a King Cause This Pawn Shuld Run..Wheres Ya Check, Mate../
Get Ya Text Strait Cause You Dont Repp Fake Just Online You Collect Traits Of a Captin
Itz Only When He Rapping Every One Up For War Like Tha Army Wus Drafting?!../
He Ayn From Tha Hood So i'll Throw in Back Of Tha Trunk, Wen His Cap Missin At Da Gas Tank
He Packin a Pump..What Question Was i Asking This Punk?! Ya Verses Never Hadda Gurl../
Cause Ya Rappings Bin Dumped Ya Right Hand Bin Chop'd Fa 30 Days U Ayn Got Ass in a month
u Going Crazy Like Baby Why it Gottah Be This Way Be..Plus U Tried Rapin a Racoon And Got Raybees/
Ya Life is Fucked Like a Chicks Coochie,Driving To Death Like a Whip'd Hoopti..
He Wont Bang a Gun He'll Jus Gimme a Virus Like Sick Hoochies..Thats a Shame, ima Gift Wrap a Brain
In a Package Mayne, Send It To Hell For Ya After Life..Tsunami Status Dis is Whut Happenz Wen a Hazard Hyped/

i like poached eggs but not this drop

okay hazard i didnt think this was the best drop but i think it was better then your others. if there was one thing to be working on in your structure and flow, its just so hard to tell were a bar starts and were a bar finishes with your style that you write in.. anyway didnt think was to bad.



Spitt Ether Unload a Clip Till None in Tha Pistol Left, Make Ya Jaw Decay Like Crystal Meth/
Grilling Me Ima Punch Ya Grill Till Aint No Crystals Left.

^ okay that was pretty good hazard, the best bar in your drop.

Agree with that being your best bar!

Think there's been a long time since I've read anything from u.. and i was suprised, no offense, but u're starting to make sense.. u've got some tight ideas, but u're unable to exploit them to the fullest.. need to work on that.. and u also tried some wordplay, it almost worked, but seemed a bit dumb in my opinion.. i'm just being straight with u here.. it's better then what i've read from u earlier.. so your headin the right direction man.. keep it up!

lol Rhino Battle Me On Audio U Big Bitch

I WOULDNT BATTLE YOU TEXT! LOL

i got NOTHIN ta prove against you little bitch

But u Taken a Whole Lottah Shots On Text..
U Cant Get On Ya Audio Grind Dough ???
lol NIGGAH!! U WEAK...Ur a Waste Of My Time But Since
ima Tear Plex And All Dem New Assholes U Culd Get it To..

-.HaZarD.- wrote:But u Taken a Whole Lottah Shots On Text..

ILL BUST MORE SHOTS THAN YA FIND AT SINK OR SWIM

DROP WHATEVER YOU GON DROP YOU STILL CANT SEE ME LYRICALLY

YOU A SHORT BUS RAPPER

Ur Some Comedian... Ayyyy Dont Be SCARED!

Hazard could be getting bullets in the head, and be like "yah bro, take that DOUGH"

I Laugh At U Dirty Ass Niggahz... Im 16 Son.. I Make U Niggahz Look Stupid
lol None OF Yall Will Touch Da Mic Man.. Diss Me Ona Track So I Can Show U
Whoz Really Gettin Bullitz In Da Head...

Exactly you're just a little kid with a big mouth.