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I'm slammin the system cause of the injustice and poverty
plannin to fist these fuckin politicians cause they're robbin me
pointin fingers at the population randomly like a lottery
removing the arteries of a community leaving them bleeding non-stopping
causing extreme actions like gun-poppin filling the pentitentiary
crashin with the elementary values we're all raised to maintain
they're enhazed to attain our attention without any resistance
like they don't care of our existence, just wave ya flag honorably
they've turned vulnerably and it's time to accept the erudition
if they give me the permission to dishonor, i'll be suspicious
of the fact that the abolitious abscesses of the planet is diminishing
and that the era of injustice is finishing, the poor are no longer menacing
music is man's mental medicin, it's intelligience shaped in his words
u can crack a man's mouth till it slurs, but that won't behead him totally
u'll never remove the mind that has fed him nobelly with his respect
it proves his rhymes are immortal to people and that's somethin to protect

Thanks man, it's much appreciated!

music is man's mental medicin, it's intelligience shaped in his words
u can crack a man's mouth till it slurs, but that won't behead him totally
u'll never remove the mind that has fed him nobelly with his respect
it proves his rhymes are immortal to people and that's somethin to protect
^^
really feelin that

nice piece vocab was on point as usual flow was good

strong piece stayed on topic good shit homie

thanks man.. appreciated!!


UPPIN for feeeedback mafuckaaas!

u can crack a man's mouth till it slurs, but that won't behead him totally
u'll never remove the mind that has fed him nobelly with his respect
it proves his rhymes are immortal to people and that's somethin to protect

^ Whut i Liked

"I'm slammin the system cause of the injustice and poverty
plannin to fist these fuckin politicians cause they're robbin me "

Voting republican 08?

"of the fact that the abolitious abscesses of the planet is diminishing
and that the era of injustice is finishing, the poor are no longer menacing
music is man's mental medicin, it's intelligience shaped in his words
u can crack a man's mouth till it slurs, but that won't behead him totally
u'll never remove the mind that has fed him nobelly with his respect
it proves his rhymes are immortal to people and that's somethin to protect"

Yah. I thought it was an ok drop until this hit.

Aiit, appreciate your honesty!

Thanks for feedback Hazard