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Quick.

Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 9:50 pm
by Momeijah
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Dom's Back To Terrorize This Shit With More-Scriptures ..||
ill Hammer 'Nails in This Board' Faster Than Floor-Fitters ..||
Notice All The Women Left When u Lost ur Bar-Slayer? ..||
Bitch i 'Snap More G-Strings' Than Fat Guitar-Players ..||
i Could Crush Half This Place With Shit i Poorly-Wrote ..||
My Windows 'Hold More Jabs' Than The Punch And Judy-Show ..||*
Still Extending My Record With My Phenomenal-Spits ..||
Y'all Know When The 'Game is Won' They'll Shout 'Domino-Bitch!' ..||**

Yeah Just a Quick Punchline Piece i Wrote 10 Mins Ago, Nothin Special.

*Punch And Judy Show, Has a 'Window' So it's Like a TV, But it's a Live Show. Google it. And Punch Beats Up His Wife So Yeah.

**When u Win a Game Of Dominos, u Say Dooomino.

Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 2:10 am
by B-Bear
I like it!!

Decent punches, wordplay, similies... Should we consider this the start of your comeback? Hope so!

Flow's on point - in other words, a solid drop! A bit short tho..

Keep it up!

Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:12 pm
by Brah-Vo
that was pretty sweet for a quickie. nice work bitch.