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bored so i wrote a lil somethin

Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 11:42 am
by -TraMaTiK-
the lights on we gotta burn the wack
and hope everyone learns the facts
i aint Mark Morrison but its 'the return of the mack'
one word written is another key phrase,but
my mindz spinnin like im fucked up
but i cant be blazed,
aint touched it in months
i only be grippin this pen and rippin these men,
who think they big cuz there rockin ice n sippin some hen,
truth of the matter is im slick not insane
and my deepness iz like ya blood stickin in ur veins..

Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 5:55 pm
by complexity
You got pretty creative with the rhyme scheme.

I kinda liked this.

Nice job.

Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 11:01 am
by Cee4
to me this was pretty average. kinda boring and basic. not your best drop