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im gonna vent now on how i was up, and then sent down
from the heavens to the bottom of the basement
and worked my way back ta the penthouse
called cats timid ta blast, like a mouse wit guns
my limits surpassed em, im more "G" than a thousand 1's
think you shine my lime is bigga... shit i never even rhymed wit nigga
on a mission ta climb n dig, til i could play foosball wit diamond figures
if i dont do nothin ima ball, fuck the consequence
and its obvious im ominous n too dominant the rest is nonsense shit
they ask me what i spit that irony for
the irony is, my clothes stay clean n pressed
while ya layin flat as an ironing board
killin with the pen and dying by the sword
quote me im no killer and wont lie on my word
but what ya eyeing me for, cuz im so divine in war
defending against my writtens, is as violent as sports

i would say the first half was great the end was good but the multies were off, which too me threw off the flow, but other than that it was nice and a solid piece.

appreciate the feed

the next couple are gonna be longer this was like an intro kinda dilly

thanks homie appreciate the feed

ehh to be honest, wasn't ya best drop. I've seen you do heaps more better in the collabos.

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while ya layin flat as an ironing board
killin with the pen and dying by the sword
quote me im no killer and wont lie on my word
but what ya eyeing me for, cuz im so divine in war
defending against my writtens, is as violent as sports

Overall, I like this one better then the last.

The difference between your best drops and semi-decent drops is crazy though.

This was kinda nice.

"and its obvious im ominous n too dominant the rest is nonsense shit
they ask me what i spit that irony for
the irony is, my clothes stay clean n pressed
while ya layin flat as an ironing board
killin with the pen and dying by the sword "

Lyrically the piece was straight.