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my crew we eat good i know you speak hood but you from a weak hood
fuckin with me could have your mouth runnin... when ya feet should
dont front when ya bitch made all its gon do is get ya stuck wit switchblades
i drip game n aint shit changed but cats still actin tough with nicknames
i know how ta fly low hit the hydro watch the radar wait for the blip n aim
grand opening, curtain may close sure i know that my foe may be survival
but i got one hand reserved for the rifle and the other palm closin your bible
leave you beat in despair air of the night nah i can feel the heat in the air
home court advantage im beating em there cookin fools that beef n serve em medium rare
ima beast cuz when it comes to crankin lines bitch im frankenstein
and when it comes down ta pumpin dummies i rap like im the fuckin mummy
and when it comes ta slashin flippers im attachin zippers like im jack the ripper ha ha
test me n see how far we go sucker no heart ill leave ya with ya cardio smothered
stay spic n span like i got the barrio covered n i smash more bricks than a mario brother
dont even attempt ta say ya harder than me yall seen the tatto thats the mark of the beast
marksman long range shots behind the arc of the 3 n csi wouldnt find a mark on your sheets...

first 2 bars were str8, fell off from there imo. overall drop was decent

thanks 4 the feed

I wasn't feeling this that much.

It did have some nice lines though.

"my crew we eat good i know you speak hood but you from a weak hood
fuckin with me could have your mouth runnin... when ya feet should"

"test me n see how far we go sucker no heart ill leave ya with ya cardio smothered
stay spic n span like i got the barrio covered n i smash more bricks than a mario brother "

Not horrible, but a lot of shit didn't make sense to me.

The whole piece was straight. had its ups and down.i liked part 1 better then this

flow was great
but to be honest wasnt really feelin your concepts like

home court advantage im beating em there cookin fools that beef n serve em medium rare
ima beast cuz when it comes to crankin lines bitch im frankenstein
and when it comes down ta pumpin dummies i rap like im the fuckin mummy

Good job though man. keep droppin. lookin forward to part 3.

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my crew we eat good i know you speak hood but you from a weak hood
fuckin with me could have your mouth runnin... when ya feet should
dont front when ya bitch made all its gon do is get ya stuck wit switchblades
i drip game n aint shit changed but cats still actin tough with nicknames