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Dom We Have a Problem, Time For Grabbin-My-Scream-Mask ..||
Cuz Bitch im 'Off The Rails' Like Coke Addicts-in-Rehab! ..||
Motherfuck This Bitch's Precious internet Career, it's-Finished ..||
if u Retired Now Kid All u Got's ur Pride To Relinquish ..||
Noone Feels The Shit u Write, Noone Listens-To-ur-Tracks ..||
Fuck a Knife, Gimme a Pillow And ill Split-This-Stupid-Twat ..||
Dude's Like 14, u Still Prolly Getting Sent-To-ur-Bed ..||
Boy The Only 'Hits' On ur Page Are From Elderly-Men! ..||
ur Like a Paraplegic Dancer, u Stay STILL With The 'Moves-u-Make' ..||
ur Myspace Should Be Renamed 'Ear Torture Endurance-Race!' ..||
it's Like a Playstation Pad Dude, All They're Doing is Clicking-X ..||
u Ain't Worth My Time, This is Quick, Hazard Will Be Spitting-Next ..||

Leave Feed And ill Return The Favour.

it was normal , and you can write much better than that. = dissappointment.

dont return the favor

Had a few chuckles. Better then "Grammar doesn't exist in my world" guy. Nice work

was this a diss towards me?

SequencE wrote:was this a diss towards me?

Yeah i Forgot u Had a Myspace Page And Recorded Fake Gangsta Rap.

in Other Words, No.

yeah this decent. not up to your old standards but i seen the other dudes verse and if it was a battle you`d win hands down. decent flow and multis

fav bars were the opener and closer

Dom We Have a Problem, Time For Grabbin-My-Scream-Mask ..||
Cuz Bitch im 'Off The Rails' Like Coke Addicts-in-Rehab! ..||

it's Like a Playstation Pad Dude, All They're Doing is Clicking-X ..||
u Ain't Worth My Time, This is Quick, Hazard Will Be Spitting-Next ..||

i liked it good job

ur Like a Paraplegic Dancer, u Stay STILL With The 'Moves-u-Make' ..||
ur Myspace Should Be Renamed 'Ear Torture Endurance-Race!' ..||
it's Like a Playstation Pad Dude, All They're Doing is Clicking-X ..||
u Ain't Worth My Time, This is Quick, Hazard Will Be Spitting-Next ..||


Word^^ I Liked THat Dom.. LoL @ Lyrical King..Settin Up his Own Caskit