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Growing Up I Meet-My-Peers And Thought I Was Tough..
Life Was Rough, Blood Sweat-And-Tears Wasnt Enough..
From That Day, I Gave Up And Had No Luck-With-Peers..
Found A Gift Of Rappin, And Hiphop Was Stuck-In-My-Ears.
More Then A Lifestyle, But It's Filled Up With Gimicks-N-Stress.
Make One Mistake, Take The Shame Of The Critics-And-Press.
These Are The Things, That Will Make Your Carrer In Doubt .. But
Take Tha Good With Bad, Even When The Good Wont Equal Out..
Remember The Days, Were You Tryed To Rap, And Had No Clue?
Now You Spit Dope, Fans Everywere And Cant Belive Thats You ?

yeah i kno, i did this really quick.. i was just getting away from my typical drops. thanks for the feed

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I don't know, I thought this was more real than some of his other drops.

I liked the ending. It was a bit generalized but still pretty good.

The last two bars, brought the piece together.

7/10

Best piece ive ever read from you sequence, flowed perfectly and your multies were more meaningfull than ever. I wished it was longer.

go0od shiiitt,lyrics n flow was on poiiint


VV real shit.

Take Tha Good With Bad, Even When The Good Wont Equal Out..
Remember The Days, Were You Tryed To Rap, And Had No Clue?
Now You Spit Dope, Fans Everywere And Cant Belive Thats You ?