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Overwhelming Emotion Now My Rapture-Is-Reality
This World's Mine, But I Cant Capture-The-Galaxy
Stars-Will-Shine.. In A Black Sky, Creating A Vibe
These Bars-Of-Mine, Are Things Word's Wont Describe
Murder, Ill Do-It, Asking If I Should Go Through With It
But Naw, Ill Add Pain To A Pad, Look What I Bring To It
Now I Anit Cocky, But Know One Will Defeat-My-Writtens
Falling In Love With, Battles Poems Beats-And- Rhythms
I Have Rap In My Palms, But I'm Starting To Fumble...
Almost There, Last Step, Soon As I Know I Fall N Stumble..

shit was pretty dopetastic kid, ill agree prolly one of your better pieces as of late that i have read, keep up the writin, the only problem i have wit it is it was a lil short

Shits pretty sick kid....Definitely one of the better pieces that I've read.


Stars-Will-Shine.. In A Black Sky, Creating A Vibe
These Bars-Of-Mine, Are Things Word's Wont Describe
Murder, Ill Do-It, Asking If I Should Go Through With It
But Naw, Ill Add Pain To A Pad, Look What I Bring To It
^^
My favourite bit.

Short, but good shit still, keep dropin'.