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jeah, some new shit, check it out. feedback is appreciated.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6076720

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*edited with a slightly better mix.

The flow was good but Im just not fan of that type of beats. And you should raise your vocals make them clearer and maybe rap a bit slower see how that works out.

lyrically this was pretty ill man, vocals are abit low, beat was sick.. but for me its lyrics over anything, good drop

heres my mix of it, sounds a lil better

UPPING. come on now.

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This Was Dope, Probably One Of My Favourite Drops Here.

i Like ur Approach To The Delivery Of The Lyrics, How Do i Explain, Umm Jumpy? Haha, But it's Cool And u Have Good Presence On The Mic Which is Always an important Factor. Mixing Was ill, Quality Didn't Bother Me And The Beat Was Nice.

For The Lyrics id Say Meh They Weren't The Best ive Heard From u, Technically They Were Dope But They Weren't My Type. For The Type They Were id Say They Were Dope Though, i Donno if Punchlines Are ur Thing Or Not But a Few More in There Would've Made it More Spicy id Say.

Overall it Was a Dope Track With Replay Value So Keep Dropping.

lyrics wise..it was dope.....the flow wasnt bad....vocal quality was here n there...sometimes it was decent n sometimes it was bad...n dey were a bit low..had to put my speakers up..beat was straight tho......ya voice reminds me of dis one rapper..im tryin to think of his name...if i ever manage to remember ill let ya kno..lol not dat it matters tho...keep droppin dem audios

Viral wrote:lyrics wise..it was dope.....the flow wasnt bad....vocal quality was here n there...sometimes it was decent n sometimes it was bad...n dey were a bit low..had to put my speakers up..beat was straight tho......ya voice reminds me of dis one rapper..im tryin to think of his name...if i ever manage to remember ill let ya kno..lol not dat it matters tho...keep droppin dem audios

e-40? imo kinda sounds a lil like him at points, my mix is slightly better dunno which you peeped

drunken jesus wrote:

Viral wrote:lyrics wise..it was dope.....the flow wasnt bad....vocal quality was here n there...sometimes it was decent n sometimes it was bad...n dey were a bit low..had to put my speakers up..beat was straight tho......ya voice reminds me of dis one rapper..im tryin to think of his name...if i ever manage to remember ill let ya kno..lol not dat it matters tho...keep droppin dem audios

e-40? imo kinda sounds a lil like him at points, my mix is slightly better dunno which you peeped

hahaha yeah i think dats who!..lol ill have to listen again to make sure

yeah this shit was pretty dope, quality was low but thats it, flow and lyrics were right on point