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it was all a dream big until shine speaks
havin dahli visions of a scrambled egg time piece
give me the date n time face ta face i would break ya spine
aprils fine fool why am i sick(6) cuz my .35(7 ate ya 9)
ha, watch me get amped n buck the truth
fuck this dude, the difference between "champ n chump" is "u"(you)
caught in the light like a deer frightened
i cant believe all these queers fightin
bout what there peers writin, ill make ya fear mic's(mike),
like tyson before all the ear bitin
yeah i been fuckin beaten, never be undefeated
but i dont fuckin need it, cuz i could still
pluck ya freedom from ya n leave ya stuck wit needles
all i here in the streets is please no
let these fiends no, i pump adreno n hump them c- notes,
the pump when she blow believe thats when ya peeps know,
when i tuck her, break bread cuz money talks like movies wit charlie sheen jokes
wit that get got appliance i rock wit violence
plot wit tyrants im a genius blastin like its rocket science
proof, im a god of war that means i move the tanks
your shootin blanks im ruthless as i bruise the ranks
crossin over n bruisin anks mobilize grind and groove the flanks
of my opponents in that f-14 tom like i cruise wit hanks
theres boredom in the war room til you act wrong
thats when the general assembles the troops n the attacks on
provin theres no excuses for a white boy executin black songs
n you couldnt stop the reign if you was quotin shaq songs
pay attention listen up open ya eyez read me
but dont get the wrong impressions
its like a long depression when i arm the wesson
the palms in session my heart is black n pumpin wrong intentions
praise me n maybe ill up the eagle shit on ya
n leave you covered in a fecal monument
hawk eye vision wit no equal im so regal
a king layin the law like my flows a legal document

My nigga Rh1no stays sick wit the gun-play talk. Luv this shit...haha And normally I don't feed as often as I used to, but I read this and it was too raw not to say sumthin.
The why am I six, cuz my .357 ate ya 9 line was stickin it to 'em.
...I also found the "Move the tanks-shootin blanks-as i bruise the ranks" bar dope as fuck.
Sliiiiiiiiick niggaaaaaaa...haha

Probably one of the better pieces i've seen from you rh1no, if not the best.
flow was good your punches were hard and ur wordplay was fucking sick man.

good job and keep up

fuck this dude, the difference between "champ n chump" is "u"(you)

i Dunno Why Er Ones hypin this So Much... ^^^ Best Line

By the Way... it Wus also the Most Creative Bar.. i Dunno i Jus dont Feel ya Flow its Whack..
Jus my Opinion Dough Dont Get all Suicidal Now..