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ghost - 1st
plex - 2nd



Fack Its a fact were back on track shit fag we never left,
Remember that Ina rap we react to snap and sever necks,
So let us bet in minutes we'll rip all you cowards in half,
Our medicine is sinnin in it to have u showered in wrath,
how is that, we flow easy like the sands thru the hour glass,
hit wit profound attacks, eatin kids up like a bag of sour patch',
Fingers pressed, pen the notes 2 open chests up like envelopes,
End ur hopes, breathin heavy check ur pulse witta stethoscope,
Like god sent us missions, our pens in vision premonitions,
Nothin less than vicious, standin back is prolly ur best decision,
Were standin wit the upper hand in battle a factual advantage,
Holdin the cannon lateral causin actual collateral damage,
Yall the base of sweet-n-low, this is where the virus meets the host,
When the heat is close, we hit the deepest blows to release the flow,
Of blood out ya veins, leave it up to us, we'll thug out ya name,
Holes cut out ya frame, guts'll spill the sickest shit to come out ya brain,


Here comes your crucifixion, we commit acts of superstition
in rap the truth is missing, the fact is - rap is my true religion
my tactics are that sick, i'll put a hatchet in your back
watch it split in half, hows that for plex back - ripping cats
burn em like aristocrats, turn em into bricks of ash
for spitting wack, and have em praying to "ghost" like a Christian mass
fuck a host, how sick is that, I'm ill enough to boast
still ya bluff when you can't touch us both, we cut ya throats
with sharp flows, leave your heart froze like ghosts
keep the knife close, in case we have to strike foes
life closed as we remove the pages, bringing psycho rage with
each page like two grenades lit ready to blow up the stage quick
leave it in blazes like every phrase is -- in this verse
engage kids like books, you done it, guaranteed I did it first
lived it, and got rid of it, now you gotta live with it
for all I done, it's like a murdering child, you can't forgive the kid

this is impressive yo, I usually read with a particular rhythm, sorta like an iambic pentameter, so when i read i kinda look for the stresses and shit, that's just how i am, I don't know if i have the right judge ur skills since u guys have been in this shit for fuckin ever, haha but i thought you guys are sick wit it.

how is that, we flow easy like the sands thru the hour glass,
hit wit profound attacks, eatin kids up like a bag of sour patch',
Fingers pressed, pen the notes 2 open chests up like envelopes,
End ur hopes, breathin heavy check ur pulse witta stethoscope,


that was vicious for ghost's part haha

life closed as we remove the pages, bringing psycho rage with
each page like two grenades lit ready to blow up the stage quick
leave it in blazes like every phrase is -- in this verse
engage kids like books, you done it, guaranteed I did it first


my favorite there, cuz here you guys prove both your flows on the same topic, makin it complimentary.

appreciate the feed..

nice verse plex

Uppin the Feed

Word...Like Arnvincible stated above. It's good to see that both of ur flows are on the same topic. Whenever there's a collab...you never wanna see the two artists wander off in different directions when there's a particular concept in mind.

What makes the collab between the two of you all that much better when you ride a certain concept is the fact that you both have very different writing-styles. Ghost more of the multi-writer meets Plex the detail-writer. It's extremely obvious the difference in styles. So it makes a written collab more interesting to read because of the fact that ur reading 2 different styles about the same shit. (almost) I'm sure you understand what I'm getting at. haha

Both verse were pretty solid enough to say that they were both thouroughly good...so there's no need to pin-point someones "best bar" on this one. But for being so short in length...it's good writing spoke volumes.

2 feeds aint good enuff for this

uppin

This was the hottest piece ive read here in a while.
I absoloutely love it.

This shit was dope.
Lmao i cant get over it.
I;ve read it about 10 times now.
Both came hard and both verses were neck at neck.

It was just THAT good.

No exaggeration/homo/dick riding here.
This real talk.

Favo parts:


Fack Its a fact were back on track shit fag we never left,
Remember that Ina rap we react to snap and sever necks,
So let us bet in minutes we'll rip all you cowards in half,
Our medicine is sinnin in it to have u showered in wrath,
how is that, we flow easy like the sands thru the hour glass,
hit wit profound attacks, eatin kids up like a bag of sour patch',
Fingers pressed, pen the notes 2 open chests up like envelopes,
End ur hopes, breathin heavy check ur pulse witta stethoscope,


Here comes your crucifixion, we commit acts of superstition
in rap the truth is missing, the fact is - rap is my true religion
my tactics are that sick, i'll put a hatchet in your back
watch it split in half, hows that for plex back - ripping cats
burn em like aristocrats, turn em into bricks of ash
for spitting wack, and have em praying to "ghost" like a Christian mass