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Posted: **Tue Jan 01, 2008 1:58 pm**

Yo im back for 2008

ive been lookin around for rappers and i found a new youngin who goes by the name C-Starr aka A.I.(Artificial Intelligence) this was a freestyle it wasnt really suppose to be nething but it turned out to be better than i thought
leave sum comments bout it tell me if i got better or not coz i wanna become 10 times better in 2008 and only you guys can help me by tellin me what i should work on and what i do is good and wat not so leave sum feedback

Posted: **Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:09 pm**

much better then previous drop you've posted. props

Posted: **Wed Jan 02, 2008 2:06 am**

thnx

uppin for feedback

Posted: **Wed Jan 09, 2008 3:26 am**

that echo effect...is way tooooo much!...and u sound like u got a speech impediment....lol maybe its jst me....ur at least..some wat goin wit da beat.....even tho its still kinda off..its more like...u need to work on ur presence n delivery...extremely...n get a new mic......maybe 3...who knos watll work....and next time....ask someone who knows how to mix...to mix ur shit...otherwise....keep doin ur thing...

Posted: **Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:17 am**

ight ill keep that shit in mind thanks man

uppin for feed

Posted: **Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:19 am**

beats aight, yeah that echo effect is total shit, it might work if mixed better but not here, the feel of the track was kinda aight though, for a freestyle i guess not bad, but your guy's delivery, flow and prescence needs work, but we all need work.

keep it up

Posted: **Fri Jan 11, 2008 6:36 am**

thnx man
yeah the mixin is shit but imma work on my flow and shit before i do that

Posted: **Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:59 am**

uppin for feed

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