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i was never broke but i was po, my life wasnt rock n roll
no cryin like a ho, i got on with the show im no tortured soul
im straight, i been 12 rounds with karma now we`re equal
been through real beefs, i aint wanna, but im down for a sequel
its a fine line but a distinction, like shit talkin from bitchin
im intelligent but do dumb shit, im a walkin contradiction
but as usual my faults large, so they got me boot outta college
cause of a bullshit assault charge, they aint dispute my knowledge
fuck em, i landed on my feet with a new job n a company car
gotta laugh at these soundclick rappers thinkin their gon be a star
in this world im movin up, but i remain stuck in my ways
i dont give a fuck, i`ll be the same till the times up on my days
for now i got people anticipating me like an Osama speech
dead Yanks, i got the battlezone lookin like Omaha beach
ive been runnin this net text, ha ha its a dot com demolition
only battler gettin respect since i aint got Doms competition
i pick rappers apart, like forensics when their faced with a murda
future elected champ, n it aint got nothin to do with my race or my lover
in crew battles im the best, i could give a shit whos the sicker set
since 12 a weed n liquor vet, i seen plenty go, in truth im sick a death
my familys cursed with cancer, but i stay puffin on my cigarette
the reaper got me at gunpoint he just aint pulled the trigga yet......

... CR@CK....

Yo.. i Had the "Get Em Daddy" Instrumental On When i Was Readin Dis..
in My head it Flowed Nice With Da Beat... But yo.. i Liked This piece


its a fine line but a distinction, like shit talkin from bitchin
im intelligent but do dumb shit, im a walkin contradiction
^^ Yo this Shit.. it Wus Hard on Some Real ... How u Explained Shit durin ya Bar..


fuck em, i landed on my feet with a new job n a company car
gotta laugh at these soundclick rappers thinkin their gon be a star <<I>>> my familys cursed with cancer, but i stay puffin on my cigarette
the reaper got me at gunpoint he just aint pulled the trigga yet......


i Liked da Drop C.. Keep Droppin Son..

This drop was real tight man. A lot of your bars didn't need explaining, they explained themselves and I like that.

Good job, bro.

This was a dope piece cee.
This is the best that i've seen from you in a while.
Looks like you aint rusty at all lol.

Fave bars:

i was never broke but i was po, my life wasnt rock n roll
no cryin like a ho, i got on with the show im no tortured soul

its a fine line but a distinction, like shit talkin from bitchin
im intelligent but do dumb shit, im a walkin contradiction

my familys cursed with cancer, but i stay puffin on my cigarette
the reaper got me at gunpoint he just aint pulled the trigga yet......
^^^ closer was fkn dope.

id say this shit was pretty fuckin dope man, all the your quotable bars are stated above, nice shit kid

i def liked dis piece...it sticks to the title "real talk"....haha....rhyme scheme wasnt all amazing but it didnt have to be...flow was pretty good too...keep it up man

thanks for the feedback people