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1 hour battle
8 bars
house rules
verse is a little late thats okay yo.

You weak man,you dont write punchlines u write PUNCH GAGS (ick nig)
man you white trash but mite i ask why are you such a fag?

Im the MVP, im a fucking GIANT when Height is MENTIONED
Hey why dont you try spellin one word right in a sentence (WHACK!)

horny adolescent i searched ya house and all i found was cum stained rags
i heard ya last audio and even after 2 years u still sound like a fag

ehh stop rhymin, stop writin stop spreading your GAY SHIT
Jackin styles, get ya own swag and stop suckin DZK's DICK

your first pube was ur pre pubescent present, mate you lost ya innocence (word up)
Fuck you aint elevated, you aint the multi king, your illest's jailbait adolescent princess

i've stepped up, dont think this'll be a walkover again dude
yeh this'll be a good battle, except i got more wins then u got pubes (HAHA!)

you always whine,"HEY that win was mine!",do you really think you can win this?
also, next time you do and interview make sure you know who RAKIM IS
interview-with-freeflo-vt1989.html

overcomin adversity, you won alotta battles, wont get past me tho
ayo watch ya back coz ill make ya brain juice "FREEFLO" (real talk)

posted my verse abit earlier

I'll Devour-Your-Coast, With Writtens, I Obtain More Power-Then-Most..
Im Beating You In Five Minutes Flat.. So Why's There An Hour-To-Post..
Shit's Not Worth-The-Felling, I Anit Talking About U Buzzing-Wit-Lube
Battling Raiza It's A Perfect-Killing Since There's Nothing-To-Prove!...
Check His Battle Record.. Impressive.. I Feel Bad Beating-This-Poor-Man
Now He Wonts Me To Drop Quick..He Wrote His Verse Weeks-Before-Hand!
Iv'e Tamed-This-Shit, Thinking Your Dope!? Saying You Nice-Your-Sinning!
Now Faggot You've Claimed-Your-Big! All U Eat Is Fucking Rice-For-A-Living!
Turn Your Dome Into Jeloten, After This Battle Me And The Lames-Are-Through
Now Asking Me To Battle You.. A Fuckin Skeleton's Got More Brains-Then-You!
Ripping-This-Fat-Kid..This Faggot Anit Shit He's His Towns-Weakest!
spitting-that-whack-shit.. the only time your having crouds-speechless

there's 6 bars.. i didnt try one bit.. dont care iff i lose

Aight...

First off..Good battle from both cats...Nothin really eye poppin but still yall put together a solid verse. Raiza...U started Aight but then u started to fall off in the middle..Then u kinda got it back wit that Rakim Line (Sick Personal...SEQ...SHAME ON U..J/p) Seq..U held together all the way thru..Really liked da flow delivery was str8...

VOte: Sequence

Aiight Time to Break it Down..

Multis: Seq By a Mile..
Personals: Raiza
Flow: Seq
Punchlines : Raiza
Entertainment: Raiza


Aiight .. Sequence There Were a Few Lines when u Hyped up & i Could Feel it.. But dis Dood had More

yeh this'll be a good battle, except i got more wins then u got pubes (HAHA!)

Vote - Raiza Sharp
Jackin styles, get ya own swag and stop suckin DZK's DICK

clean sweep - vote - Seq

even though that rakim line was dope as fuck

i think hazard meant to vote for raiza he got more cats.. but dont lock this till hazard see's this did u vote for me or raiza lol?

Yeah..Seq gotta point..

How u give punches to Raiza..then give the vote to Sequence 80 percent of a battle revolves around the Punch...Weird!!

But thats on u...

OOO Shit Good Lookin Out Guys.. LOL i Voted For Raiza. i'll Fix it

The Rakim Line Wasn't Really Dope There Was No Punchline, He Just Told Him To Find Out Who Rakim Was Lmao.

Sequence Stop Copying My Style, And Stop Typing Like Me Also. And Use More Punchlines.

Battling Raiza It's A Perfect-Killing Since There's Nothing-To-Prove!...

^^That Punch Was Actually Close To Almost Nearly impressing Me, Just About.

Now He Wonts Me To Drop Quick..He Wrote His Verse Weeks-Before-Hand!

^Christ i Don't Want To See This Line Again i Think Everyone Here Has Used it. But Meh, u Said u Weren't Trying, But ive Not Seen Much Better From u When u Are Trying.

Raiza, Work On ur Punchlines But u Have a Decent Sense Of Humour When it Comes To Battling And ur Kind Usually Become Sick With Punches (For Example; Cee4 And i).

your first pube was ur pre pubescent present, mate you lost ya innocence (word up)
Fuck you aint elevated, you aint the multi king, your illest's jailbait adolescent princess

i've stepped up, dont think this'll be a walkover again dude
yeh this'll be a good battle, except i got more wins then u got pubes (HAHA!)

Decent^

Raiza i Suggest u Think Up Some Funny Punches, And Same To u Sequence Since u Are Really Lacking in That Department. Concentrate Less On Trying To Make The Biggest Multis And Concentrate More into Actually Putting Some Content into ur Verse.

Vote - Raiza, By a Hair.

thanks for the vote..

Sequence took this hands down.

I thought it was a pretty hype battle though.

Raiza had a lot of weak punches, so Sequence wins that category.

I felt Sequences personals more as well.

Sequence had a smoother flow as well.

Overall: Sequence

thanx for the votes. 3-2 uppin.

Punches: Raiza
Flow: Sequence
Personals: Raiza

Vote: Raiza