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heavy multiples

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 12:11 pm
by M.O.B
im a cool dude refused by very few, who remains true?
is the question on my mind so i gotta take the time

cuz life is comin at me, n im feelin kinda blind
i can feel it in my spine, n my blood which forms the wine

when i saved man kind, if i gave u a sign see the futures intertwined
n its all in the sky, you just have to use ur eyes

or continue livin lies, in this venue i despise
disguised in a corrupt enterprise, forget it guys

u lost me 3 bars ago, fuck a harlem flow
im like a spartin, smoke u like a carten, n a wall to put ur parts in

my prayers go out to the peopl that be narchin,
sittin tall, n im scopin out my target, timing is lethargic

ur now marked for exile, so i unload this lyrical projectile
that puts u in de-nile, like the crocodile, bring a nail file

im the judge to ur trial, my flow is really hot n im only goin mild
its not the whole flow, its just a little fuckin tile

I put the clip in, quickly hittin
get the whip, n hit the strip and
get to spittin, weekly writtens
hold this grip, n pull this bitch
and end ya livin, while im sittin

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 5:43 am
by ~Symbolikull~
you need a lil help wit ur multies homie, i mean yeah they were there but so simple. it was an aight piece though, jus givin some constructive critism

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 10:58 pm
by Haz
I put the clip in, quickly hittin
get the whip, n hit the strip and
get to spittin, weekly writtens
hold this grip, n pull this bitch
and end ya livin, while im sittin, <<< haha LOL