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excessive successes, in this game as an adolencent, rippin up the stage in a fuckin second
wen i hop out i sqeeze three mentally, taking out ur legs is the penilty

around here ur now as a has been, ill end ya time quick wit the sound of a gavlin
playin u like madden, talents what ur lackin, i see ur ass standin so this is why im clappin
bitches i be mac'n, the dough i be stackin, ur in my face, so a fool i be actin

ur moves are hastie, ur blood is tastie, dont be a bitch man, come n face me
ill put u in the ground to be found by the blood hounds, now hedin north bound
for the fourth round, its gettin really dark n ur messin wit the torch now
ur gettin really smart, but ur messin wit the source now

i got more back then a motha fuckin camel n if u beef, heres a motha fuckin sample
try n run it, n ur gonna get trampled dishin out a handfull, servings more then ample
make a choice now n remember its a gamble

i smoke weed that would make ur nose bleed, have u thinkin high like Coheed
see wit out me is like havin dro wit no blee, an O wit no G, a pro wit no steeze
n a request wit no please, so i shine on like L.E.D's n never stop, unlike a tease
until i finish the written sheet, the shits complete, wit out a beat

i got more back then a motha fuckin camel n if u beef, heres a motha fuckin sample
try n run it, n ur gonna get trampled dishin out a handfull, servings more then ample
make a choice now n remember its a gamble <<-- Best bar

feedbak?

Put a Link Where u Left Feed.. Paste it Before Dat Verse...

Yo man .. this was ok.
But it was abit simple.
Put in some multis and up ya vocab. That's my advice.
But shit was straight. Keep up my dude

Raiza i like yo Big L shit, but its a shame u prolly neva eva hurd of him or listened 2 him be4

o and how u gonna say my shit was choppy?

This was an alright drop, only things I can tell you to work on is stay more consistent with flow and expand your vocab so it doesnt seem basic.

Keep droppin.