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scribbles scratch, the writtens trashed, no shit to write
Usual mind usually filled with usual rhyme, but not tonight
Each thrown from last to first, i crumble Verse for verse,
Rehearsed this curse but disperse as each gets worse and worse
An empty mind is worse than one filled with blank thoughts
I wish i had the fire power in my head that don't shoot blank shots
No topics even come to me, everything is played out
im brained out like a bitch suckin me off while she's laid out
then just bangin her brains out, like she lossed in a bed
fuck, bored, thoughts of givin up is now crossin my head
yeahhhh watever

for a quickie this piece was pretty cool.
Flowed smooth and your multies were straight.

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scribbles scratch, the writtens trashed, no shit to write
Usual mind usually filled with usual rhyme, but not tonight

then just bangin her brains out, like she lossed in a bed
fuck, bored, thoughts of givin up is now crossin my head

thanks for the feed, just feel like i havent been in the scripts lately and i just put somethin up.

I dunno, I liked this piece. But it didnt seem like something you would write. Like...what you wrote about didnt seem to go with how you previously did.

Guess thats good for diversity though, haha.

I wanna see another real tight drop though soon.

yeah i have something now, but idk how im gna transform this topic into a flow...it'll happen though