Page 1 of 1

Don't Play With Me

Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 5:02 am
by -TraMaTiK-
new song i juz finished writin...might possibly record it im still decidin idk but this only has 2 verses bcuz the beat i wrote to only had 2 verses in it so yea leave some feed n shit


chorus:

Man dont play with me
i aint even in the mood
u got somethin 2 say ta me
just dont act a fool
[say twice]

verse1:

i gotta burn the leeches of rap
4 thinkin they reachin my stats
sorta like mase preachin on tracks
but im tried of teachin these kats
its about time i collect my stripes
stand up and correct these dikes
who really think they infect the mic
they wrong and what i reflect its like
a mosh pit cuz u expect the hype
its 2 late u cant protect ya life
lights off lemme connect this light
blindin u bitches directly on sight
but u had 2 select me right?
me against u?check the fight
either way u'll respect me tonight
a rabid dog u cant reject my bite

Man dont play with me
i aint even in the mood
u got somethin 2 say ta me
just dont act a fool
[say twice]


verse2:

round 2 i got the game seized
words that'll give u brain freeze
as soon as i go 2 aim these
slugs n let them thangs squeeze
u been thru some pain?PLEASE
bet u cant even name 3
who be smokin on the same tree's
watch her dont let ya dame free
cuz it wud be a shame'ta see
her fail, 4 tryna change me
justa hoodrat tryna claim cheese
yall dont kno my flame be
ready'ta take out these lame g's
but dont u dare decieve me dude
i swear what i concieve iz true
and u gotta believe im thru
with the games u can leave me too
[but]

Man dont play with me
i aint even in the mood
u got somethin 2 say ta me
just dont act a fool
[say twice]

Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 1:40 pm
by Haz
round 2 i got the game seized
words that'll give u brain freeze
as soon as i go 2 aim these
slugs n let them thangs squeeze
u been thru some pain?PLEASE
bet u cant even name 3
who be smokin on the same tree's
watch her dont let ya dame free
cuz it wud be a shame'ta see
her fail, 4 tryna change me
justa hoodrat tryna claim cheese
yall dont kno my flame be
ready'ta take out these lame g's
but dont u dare decieve me dude
i swear what i concieve iz true
and u gotta believe im thru
with the games u can leave me too
[but]


KILLED IT DAT VERSE^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 1:43 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
good looks shaz,uppin

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 12:09 am
by T-Stylez
Yeah i liked it, u gotta great flow i must say.

Good use of multies...

Idk wut feedback i can give ya really, its all good 2 me

Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 1:31 am
by -TraMaTiK-
good looks on all the feed