Hip Hop Forum

You have 24 hours to respond to 2 bars (4 lines), and it will go 4 rounds.

Flipping is not only allowed but encouraged.
It's successful in the tourney so lets see how this goes in regular battles.

No deadline for check, Koms. Just check soon like you said you would. Let me know who you want to go first when you check in. This is my check.

No hate votes/dick riding. You guys know the rules.

check, it doesn't matter who goes first, although i won't be responding right away considering im going to sleep in about 5 minutes so i'll get to it in the morning whether u drop before or after

You need to stop makin tracks, you a like a faulty machine runnin with a-cog-slow
Ive read your old drops n you got less "Maltese"(multis) than a Purina-Dog-Show
Thinkin he the king of graphics, in his pro he uses a pic jus painted over with a-white-brush
I said it before to stick to design because callin me out Ill leave you Stevie Wonder'd with a-sight-crush

a sight-crushed? honestly...u write-stuff that proves how much ur life-sucks,
ur harmless against me...my punches would knock u out... with a light-touch,

i was born as a veteran~child skilled, my style's-ill,
even my garbage is 10 times better~then~wild-bill

You got a nasty flow, you can't spit fire so it-has-to-be-mild
With every whack track, you should just audition for Destiny's Child
Lyrical body building its like Im on roids benching, and you can hardly lift-a-ten
Why the fuck would you call me out boy, maybe you should check the-Scrips-again

sure i'll check the "scrips" for him, but remember after u i'm next-to-flip-n-win,
u'll be stupid for even droppin after this..that's just more text-to-rip-again,
bill makes himself look bad, i won't even have to start-to-diss-him,
cuz the only reason his fat ass takes "roids" is cuz he has a heart-condition,

Your body sinkin in the ocean, not floatin, cause rumors is crackers get soggy in water
Youd think that you would have an ounce of talent when you look like Eminems illegitmate daughter
The best thing about this battle is I dont even have to flip your bars to stray from a loss
Because I refuse to repeat shit from a limp-wrist toddler who invites niggas over for an O-Ring toss

yada yada yada u mentioned crushin my sight but not until i ripped-thru-ya-optics,
the only reason u failed to flip is cuz u can't manage to even stick to the topics,
u picked ya bars from the dump...man all u toss-is-ya-garbage,
"the best thing about this battle"..is that u lost-this-reguardless

In your audio tracks, you dont completely fall off, you seem to smoothly teeter
Which makes you sound 'whacker' than Pee-Wee Herman in a XXX movie theatre
You flipped every line cause you have no creativity and you're just plain bad yo
I didn't have to flip once this battle, this shit just goes to prove you're still livin in Virals shadow

one thing's for sure.. ur bars r more forced n stretched then a bitch-that's-givin-labor,
i don't see u droppin audio.. so until then ur ass can stick-to-spitt~in-paper,

ya style's fully crap.. that's y i labeled-u-"shit",
and wat's the point of having rounds, if ur not even able-to-flip...

I Take it bill Wants Me to Vote

"Personal
Punches
Flow" the 3 Bullshit Cats..

So i Will..

Personals : WildBill
Punches : Ekoms
Flow : Ekoms.

Vote - Ekoms..

Bill this Wus a Hotfire Battle.. the Point wus U Were Suppose to Flip..
u Had Good Personals Goin At Ekoms Though..
He Took it With Punches & Flow Though.. Reasonin he Gets My Vote..

You're not SUPPOSED to flip. It's allowed. Big difference.

Thanks for voting though. Ekoms leads 1-0

lol ur not supposed to but its encouraged so u mine as well lol.. n e ways.. still uppin 1-0

well bill i think u should have saved your first diss on ekoms lol it was better than this,
the fact that the battle has rounds should have started a flipping onslaught , but bill didnt see that..lol
You're flow is improving and ur starting to understand multis alot better than before and ur structure is a little bit better, but truth be told, you're flow passed the middle was way too forced, you have to have consistent structure for people to follow your flow.

heres my example to back it up:

In your audio tracks, you dont completely fall off, you seem to smoothly teeter
Which makes you sound 'whacker' than Pee-Wee Herman in a XXX movie theatre

and...

Thinkin he the king of graphics, in his pro he uses a pic jus painted over with a-white-brush
I said it before to stick to design because callin me out Ill leave you Stevie Wonder'd with a-sight-crush

the lines arent balanced...obviously cuz some of the lines were overextended.

dude i think you need to read ur rap from a "judge's" perspective, if you know what i mean.
People tend to read their raps with a beat or a rhythm in their head (i know i do that sometimes) and they dont realize that other people who read their piece doesnt see it the same way...

Ekoms, I don't even know if you deserve this win because ur flow wasnt that entertaining, it just made more sense, had punches that FIT in the flow and it was a bit smoother than Bill's. That's it.

Flow: Ekoms
personals:Wild Bill
punches: Ekoms inched it lol JK ekoms got it.

Vote goes to Smoke.

i gotta agree with the two votes so far

punches-Ekoms
Personals-Wild Bill
Flow-Ekoms
Flipping-Ekoms

Vote-Ekoms